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[sid] => 6586
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => what it takes, (2 versions to this poem)
[time] => 2002-11-12 20:00:00
[hometext] => well there are 2 versions to this poem, one is shorter, and the 2nd one is an extended version, both should be pleasing to poem readers, enjoy............
[bodytext] => Version I (short)
if i were to die tomorrow would you care at my funeral, would you be there? would it take death for you to see how ungrateful you are what does it take? friends the good ones dont come easy some people cherish and respect but others dishonor and neglect some people realize they're mistakes but for others, death is what it takes ------------------------------------------------------------- Version II (Long) If i were to die tomorrow would you even care at my funeral, would you be there? would you cry, would u regret or try despertly to forget? throw out the movies we saw together? during sunny or sh***y weather act like nothing happened not remember one good time we had or how fast we got over the bad did i make an impact on your life? or was i just another face a shadow on the wall someone you couldnt talk to when you would stumble or fall did i ever make you smile or was i just a pain that you couldnt avoid every once and a while why wasnt i worth keeping around was it my reputation or my occupation someone not worth the time of a relation was i someone you could always tell the truth, and know i would understand if i ***** up, would you be able to forgive me? friends..... the good ones are hard to find some people cherish and respect but others dishonor and neglect ft I wish i knew why your not here now i wish i knew why Im not by your side i wish i knew what it took, to turn your head to make you listen to every word that i said but sometimes theres nothin you can do and the person has to realize their mistakes and unfortunately, sometimes, death is what it takes [comments] => 3 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 43 [informant] => wil_ca [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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