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Array ( [sid] => 6585 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My Shining Star [time] => 2002-11-12 19:30:00 [hometext] => About my boy at the moment and the first day we spent as a couple. That was now 2 yrs ago and our love is still strong. (it's a little old but tell me what ya think) [bodytext] => I have drugs to thank for my happiness,
they helped me make the best decision,
out of my seventeen years of life.
I still remember the very first touch,
and the look you had in your eyes.
The flirting in the water,
that warm feeling that you gave me inside.
But the one thing I will never forget,
that blissful day on the beach.
Is our very first kiss,
the way you tasted, how it felt.
For you are my only star,
I have in my eyes.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 2 [informant] => hollie85 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
My Shining Star

Contributed by hollie85 on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 07:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I have drugs to thank for my happiness,
they helped me make the best decision,
out of my seventeen years of life.
I still remember the very first touch,
and the look you had in your eyes.
The flirting in the water,
that warm feeling that you gave me inside.
But the one thing I will never forget,
that blissful day on the beach.
Is our very first kiss,
the way you tasted, how it felt.
For you are my only star,
I have in my eyes.




Copyright © hollie85 ... [ 2002-11-12 19:30:00]
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Re: My Shining Star (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 12:48:28 AM AEST
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Very nicely done,I liked this! Christina


Re: My Shining Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 03:13:25 AM AEST
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What a beautiful scene this sets Hollie,
Like Christina said, I liked this one too.

With love
Dean:-)


Re: My Shining Star (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 13th November 2002 @ 03:50:42 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, I really
enjoyed this one, it gives a good
vision and your love flows through
your poetry. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.




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