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Array ( [sid] => 65810 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paintings [time] => 2004-10-01 21:28:38 [hometext] => live to be yourself dont paint out what your gonna be. [bodytext] => You keep living off of someone else
Your speaking out like someone else
Your looking like your someone else
Your acting like your someone else

Your living a painted life
Saying painted workds
Putting on a painted face
Acting out a painted heart
Your just living a painted life

Your tired out of trying so hard
Your board of being the same someone
All you can find is
A painted life
Painted words
Painted face
Painted heart
All you can find is your painted life

Your living a painting, the artistics of your painting
Put down that brush
Stop painting a life
Let life paint through
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 21 [informant] => smelting [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Paintings

Contributed by smelting on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 09:28:38 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

You keep living off of someone else
Your speaking out like someone else
Your looking like your someone else
Your acting like your someone else

Your living a painted life
Saying painted workds
Putting on a painted face
Acting out a painted heart
Your just living a painted life

Your tired out of trying so hard
Your board of being the same someone
All you can find is
A painted life
Painted words
Painted face
Painted heart
All you can find is your painted life

Your living a painting, the artistics of your painting
Put down that brush
Stop painting a life
Let life paint through

Copyright © smelting ... [ 2004-10-01 21:28:38]
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Re: Paintings (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 09:33:55 PM AEST
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interesting. nice concept. just too redundant.

Re: Paintings (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 10:00:09 AM AEST
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I like the subject matter very much. This portrayal of life being led as if by a person subsumed in the 'painted' lies of this world. A fake person who knows not life on its own but by the enforced coloration of the painted vision. Living a lie of being not what you are but what you are perceived to be. Nice topic. But I must say that your structure and form leaves much to be desired. For such a good subject matter if you would just rework this to be in a more flowing and rhythmic form...I would say would make it better.Just my opinions but great topic though!

Re: Paintings (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:52:08 PM AEST
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the subject you used is perfect awesome poem with a better message
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