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Array ( [sid] => 65771 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She Comes For You [time] => 2004-10-01 10:53:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => She creeps down the hall
late at night,
hides in the shadows
out of sight.

Her fangs drip
with blood still,
didn't get satisfied
from her last kill.

She looks in every room
for fresh meat,
deep in her chest
her heart doth beat.

Between her fingers
she feels every crevasse of the wall,
as she silently lurks
down the dark hall.

In her hand
she holds a still beating heart,
from her last victim
with it she did part.

She comes for you
in the dead of night,
you had better hide
stay out of sight.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Sept.22/2004 [comments] => 5 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cynthia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

She Comes For You

Contributed by Cynthia on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 10:53:39 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

She creeps down the hall
late at night,
hides in the shadows
out of sight.

Her fangs drip
with blood still,
didn't get satisfied
from her last kill.

She looks in every room
for fresh meat,
deep in her chest
her heart doth beat.

Between her fingers
she feels every crevasse of the wall,
as she silently lurks
down the dark hall.

In her hand
she holds a still beating heart,
from her last victim
with it she did part.

She comes for you
in the dead of night,
you had better hide
stay out of sight.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Sept.22/2004

Copyright © Cynthia ... [ 2004-10-01 10:53:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: She Comes For You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 12:47:02 PM AEST
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Ohh very creepy, glad I read this early on, otherwise Id be quite paranoid by now hehe, great write Cynthia,

pixie xx

Re: She Comes For You (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 03:38:21 PM AEST
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very spooky gave me a chill or two still daylight here thankgoodness oh geez thanks I have to leave for work at 1:30 am tonight now Im Skerrrrrrrddddddddddd

a very haunting dark poem!
Michelle

Re: She Comes For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:53:29 PM AEST
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Awwww..I'm shaking!!!!!
Jenni

Re: She Comes For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 09:02:24 PM AEST
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excellent write. =]

Re: She Comes For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorian on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 01:33:33 PM AEST
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Man this is a gothic master peice along with flow

and rhythum, verry vivd, in a phrase, one awesome

experience . . . Dorian : )

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