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Array ( [sid] => 65748 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Best Inside Of Me [time] => 2004-09-30 23:43:13 [hometext] => The people who have walked softly through my life... for they have left little bits and pieces of themselves behind... and those who walk through my life today... they too are leaving their mark... comment welcomed... [bodytext] => When I was young and growing up
In the land of opportunities
I had no hopes... I had no dreams
No goals in life... no self- esteem
To guide me down my path in this life
To arrive at this moment in time
To open up my heart and my mind
To the endless possibilities
That lay right inside me

Then you came and walked softly through my life
Leaving little tiny bits and pieces of yourself behind
Opening my eyes to a whole new world
That lay waiting right inside for me to find
You danced through all my hopes and dreams
Stirring up thoughts and memories
That I thought were long since dead and gone
That may, yet, one day become reality

'Cause you bring out the best in me
The best that's hidden deep inside
The who I am and want to be
You inspire my life... my dreams
You bring out these qualities
The best inside of me...

Inside my head... inside my mind
Lie the thoughts and feelings that I try to hide
The simple things of my life...
How can something so simple become so complicated
Just chalk it up as one of the little truths in life

The timeless moment...
When you entered my life
Has forever changed me
Bit by bit... piece by piece
Your beautiful eyes spoke to me
Inspiring me to try and write
All the thoughts and feelings long held deep inside
As if were destined to be
Your beautiful words were inspiring to me
They lit a little spark within my soul
Changed me and made me whole
You bring out the best inside of me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 248 [topic] => 25 [informant] => kidpoet_213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
The Best Inside Of Me

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:43:13 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



When I was young and growing up
In the land of opportunities
I had no hopes... I had no dreams
No goals in life... no self- esteem
To guide me down my path in this life
To arrive at this moment in time
To open up my heart and my mind
To the endless possibilities
That lay right inside me

Then you came and walked softly through my life
Leaving little tiny bits and pieces of yourself behind
Opening my eyes to a whole new world
That lay waiting right inside for me to find
You danced through all my hopes and dreams
Stirring up thoughts and memories
That I thought were long since dead and gone
That may, yet, one day become reality

'Cause you bring out the best in me
The best that's hidden deep inside
The who I am and want to be
You inspire my life... my dreams
You bring out these qualities
The best inside of me...

Inside my head... inside my mind
Lie the thoughts and feelings that I try to hide
The simple things of my life...
How can something so simple become so complicated
Just chalk it up as one of the little truths in life

The timeless moment...
When you entered my life
Has forever changed me
Bit by bit... piece by piece
Your beautiful eyes spoke to me
Inspiring me to try and write
All the thoughts and feelings long held deep inside
As if were destined to be
Your beautiful words were inspiring to me
They lit a little spark within my soul
Changed me and made me whole
You bring out the best inside of me




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Re: The Best Inside Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Calista on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:51:24 PM AEST
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hi, great poem! i think this would go really well as a song, too. keep em coming, ~Calista


Re: The Best Inside Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 06:20:00 AM AEST
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I have to agree with Calista....I had to look at the category while reading (to see if it was listed as song lyrics)....
This had a lovely flow to it and the words were so inspiring.. Thank you for sharing this...
Jenni


Re: The Best Inside Of Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 09:49:47 PM AEST
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excellent write.




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