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Array ( [sid] => 65745 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers [time] => 2004-09-30 23:13:33 [hometext] => For someone. Bless. [bodytext] => I wanted to thank you for
the memories; dead and
canned and
flat, stored in word documents
and message histories
and dotsofpixelatedbinaryconceptualwhatevers
that I don't understand
(I don't understand anything anymore)
which are everything we ever

shared; everything we ever
had
and it was so much--
we never had today, and
we somehow missed out on yesterday, but
we found tomorrow

and tomorrow was words
'cause words were our breath, our
laugh, our
life and love and eyes and soul

and after trying
and tryingandtryingandtrying
to bend and shape my words (which
are fractured, now)
into a thank you, I still
can't.
(you're leaving and the words
are going with you and
IneedthewordsandIneedyou)

but you were always the one
who showed me how to stay strong
and I can lose the words, and smile
for you
and I can lose you, and
try to smile
(I can, I can, I will)

but I cannot shape the broken words
into a thank you, thank you, thank you god,
for the memories
and the tomorrows I will always have
because of you.

*

Much love, Becky.

your friend always,
Nora [comments] => 9 [counter] => 283 [topic] => 16 [informant] => ShadowDaughter [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers

Contributed by ShadowDaughter on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:13:33 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

I wanted to thank you for
the memories; dead and
canned and
flat, stored in word documents
and message histories
and dotsofpixelatedbinaryconceptualwhatevers
that I don't understand
(I don't understand anything anymore)
which are everything we ever

shared; everything we ever
had
and it was so much--
we never had today, and
we somehow missed out on yesterday, but
we found tomorrow

and tomorrow was words
'cause words were our breath, our
laugh, our
life and love and eyes and soul

and after trying
and tryingandtryingandtrying
to bend and shape my words (which
are fractured, now)
into a thank you, I still
can't.
(you're leaving and the words
are going with you and
IneedthewordsandIneedyou)

but you were always the one
who showed me how to stay strong
and I can lose the words, and smile
for you
and I can lose you, and
try to smile
(I can, I can, I will)

but I cannot shape the broken words
into a thank you, thank you, thank you god,
for the memories
and the tomorrows I will always have
because of you.

*

Much love, Becky.

your friend always,
Nora

Copyright © ShadowDaughter ... [ 2004-09-30 23:13:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:20:38 PM AEST
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well i thought i was done crying but after reading this im crying even harder now lol
nora.... i dont have words for this... you have no idea what it means to me.
ill always be here for you girl. always.
stay strong.
i love you deeply girl.
your friend always,
Becky

Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers (User Rating: 1 )
by sandy_poetrygodslove on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:34:42 PM AEST
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I love your poem and I love how you can express yourself in words I never could ever put together and how you put it together is beyond me. sandy

Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 08:43:13 AM AEST
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Awww, hunni, this is so sweet, and so sad.
I'll miss Becky too.
*hugs you and Becky loads*
Phil xxx

Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 11:03:03 AM AEST
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awwww this is beautiful and very moving *hugs to both of you*

takecare

pixie xx

Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 07:02:24 PM AEST
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Becky's leaving us? That's not right. Nora, this is such a sweet poem to a dear friend. None of us will ever forget her. *S* Cynthia

Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 11:30:02 AM AEST
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Well done, and I think both of you are great people, just for the record ;o)

Roses
Larry

Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:40:43 AM AEST
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well written..I feel you and your friend..both are very nice people. venkat

Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 12:49:57 AM AEST
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nora this is so sweet and beautiful, written from one very special lady to another, hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Dots of Pixelated Binary Conceptual Whatevers (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:55:20 AM AEST
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just, beautiful. truly.

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