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[sid] => 65729
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => My Last Eclipse
[time] => 2004-09-30 22:08:19
[hometext] => These are lyrics to a song I wrote, and another very personal entry in my notebook. (the more personal, the more metaphor it tends to have)
[bodytext] => Your eyes, suffocate. Your eyes, eclipse. I can't find a way to forget you. In every detail, I hear your name. The sun grows darker as the red fills my eyes, and I can only feel vibrations coursing through my lungs. And I die, lost in myself. Still you say there's something left. But what can be found in this red-tinted darkness that fills my dreams? I can't see this. I don't know what you said. The words tend to blur in the perfection the red represents. I guess that this eclipse could be my last. When you told me to dig my own grave, that I was holding too close to see the light, you laughed. You just smiled and let that eclipse carry you away. I can't see through this, so let me die now. Between the sun dying out and the planets against me, I can' see out. Your eyes, eclipse. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 48 [informant] => andthefoolshallburn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
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