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Array ( [sid] => 6569 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => No Title [time] => 2002-11-12 11:30:00 [hometext] => I couldn't give it a title because it's just not something that is easily labeled. [bodytext] => The girl walked in
messed up on blow
they know it's a sin
but no one will know

They give her a drink
now she's beyond tore
Not one of them think
as they lay her on the floor

Off comes her shirt
down come her jeans
they say it won't hurt
staring like pheigns

She tries to resist
he holds her tight
the other gets *****
it just ain't right

tears roll down her face
all she feels is pain
and total disgrace
maybe she's going insane

Now the other takes his turn
blackness is coming on
her stomach begins to churn
now all the light is gone

hours later she comes to
her arms are bruised
between her legs feels like glue
she feels ashamed and used

She's all alone
covered with a sheet
finds her clothes that were thrown
feeling so damn beat

She walks home by herself
all the way she cries
wishen for someone else
won't ever tell, can't no matter how hard she tries

Living with a terrible grief
not knowing what to do
robbed of dignity by a thief
wanting to confess what she went through

But she can't...... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 32 [informant] => ophelia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
No Title

Contributed by ophelia on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



The girl walked in
messed up on blow
they know it's a sin
but no one will know

They give her a drink
now she's beyond tore
Not one of them think
as they lay her on the floor

Off comes her shirt
down come her jeans
they say it won't hurt
staring like pheigns

She tries to resist
he holds her tight
the other gets *****
it just ain't right

tears roll down her face
all she feels is pain
and total disgrace
maybe she's going insane

Now the other takes his turn
blackness is coming on
her stomach begins to churn
now all the light is gone

hours later she comes to
her arms are bruised
between her legs feels like glue
she feels ashamed and used

She's all alone
covered with a sheet
finds her clothes that were thrown
feeling so damn beat

She walks home by herself
all the way she cries
wishen for someone else
won't ever tell, can't no matter how hard she tries

Living with a terrible grief
not knowing what to do
robbed of dignity by a thief
wanting to confess what she went through

But she can't......




Copyright © ophelia ... [ 2002-11-12 11:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Ericc on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 11:55:31 AM AEST
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This is very powerful.


Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazaholic on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 12:21:31 PM AEST
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Don`t know what to say,powerfully written makes you think


Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 12:39:52 PM AEST
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oh, god. this is a really powerfully written poem. if this is true, i can really say that i know how you feel. i hope that it isnt. you did an amazing job with putting emotions into words.


Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 12:43:58 PM AEST
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Wow..powerful and emotional.... A very heartfelt write... well done...Hope it's fictional...
Jenni


Re: No Title (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 01:56:43 PM AEST
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I really hope this didnt happen
to you, my heart goes out to you.
This is a very sad write and it's so
full of reality of what happens in
life today all to often, Thank you
for having the courage to share
this with all of us.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.




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