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One who watches, wants to know
Is there, any way ,one can see
As far as the moon seems to be
You look and stare and it seems , so close
But in the heart you know its all a hoax
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Illusions of all

Contributed by brew on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:56:57 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Moonlight, and all its glow
One who watches, wants to know
Is there, any way ,one can see
As far as the moon seems to be
You look and stare and it seems , so close
But in the heart you know its all a hoax

Copyright © brew ... [ 2004-09-30 15:56:57]
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Re: Illusions of all (User Rating: 1 )
by poetmarie on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 04:03:11 PM AEST
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I like it. It's simple and focused; mysterious.

Re: Illusions of all (User Rating: 1 )
by thewordzwithin on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:42:53 PM AEST
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Very creative! It's complex in its simplisity. I thank you for sharing. Great job!.... Oh one more thing. Thank you for the post on my poems but if you could, I hope you could go back to read "Scent of a Woman". I posted something up there that I should have posted before. It explains the poem in more detail and other poems like "Now I Lay". But anyway, Great poem and I'll be reading more to come...

Re: Illusions of all (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 04:35:29 PM AEST
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A very true poem. This posseses a depth because of the many things it does not say. Each person can apply the words to his/her own situation. Great write.

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