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Array ( [sid] => 65624 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => waste [time] => 2004-09-29 21:28:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => steel basin holding young bloody body
just wanted some love just needed somebody
vibrant chrimson pours out from the heart
steel knives dug in and tore it apart
left to drown in loneliness of this society
feel to pieces no longer strong and mighty
slashed wrrists exposed vermillion flows out
mind consumed with pain casting a world of doubt
no reason to continue living this dreaded way
life fades away on this dark rainy day
salty tears drain out of the bright blue eyes
death comes closer as her wrist begins to rise
ruby lips press against deep soothing incision
no more contemplating already made the decision
red liquid runs off the kiss leaving metallic taste
grim reapor snatches her life that's become a waste
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waste

Contributed by deadbloodyrose on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:28:31 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

steel basin holding young bloody body
just wanted some love just needed somebody
vibrant chrimson pours out from the heart
steel knives dug in and tore it apart
left to drown in loneliness of this society
feel to pieces no longer strong and mighty
slashed wrrists exposed vermillion flows out
mind consumed with pain casting a world of doubt
no reason to continue living this dreaded way
life fades away on this dark rainy day
salty tears drain out of the bright blue eyes
death comes closer as her wrist begins to rise
ruby lips press against deep soothing incision
no more contemplating already made the decision
red liquid runs off the kiss leaving metallic taste
grim reapor snatches her life that's become a waste

Copyright © deadbloodyrose ... [ 2004-09-29 21:28:31]
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Re: waste (User Rating: 1 )
by monophobic on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:15:12 PM AEST
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good write......but if ur suicidal and for whatever reason are still here, maybe here is where ur suppose to be. because u wrote a poem about killing urself, instead of actually killing urself, maybe you have more purpose than u realize...believe things happen for a reason

Re: waste (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:24:45 PM AEST
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excellent write. there seems to be a theme of razors today...

Re: waste (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:35:59 AM AEST
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OMG this is awesome

Re: waste (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:48:22 AM AEST
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sick as it sounds I enjoyed reading this so much I read it over and over, well written the last line is devestating and the rest...rapture in suicide

Re: waste (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 11:21:27 PM AEST
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wow amazing poem i loved it

Re: waste (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:43:33 PM AEST
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love it! *especially the vermillion part* you really have a true talent...dont let it go to "waste"

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