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Array ( [sid] => 65615 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => GiVe Up ThE FiGhT... [time] => 2004-09-29 20:14:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => That night
I was cradled in your arms
I was no longer alone
Fingers entwined with mine
How could something so wrong
Feel so right
How can I sit and watch
How can I bear the sight
Watching her take my place
Remembering
Falling to sleep in eachothers arms
How can I feel these things
When you could never feel them back
Ripped from my grasp
Alone again
Push the pain away
Buried deep inside
A secret shared and kept for a lifetime
So much saddness shared with so much delight
Or maybe its time to just give up the fight,,, [comments] => 6 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Delusions [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

GiVe Up ThE FiGhT...

Contributed by Delusions on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:14:39 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

That night
I was cradled in your arms
I was no longer alone
Fingers entwined with mine
How could something so wrong
Feel so right
How can I sit and watch
How can I bear the sight
Watching her take my place
Remembering
Falling to sleep in eachothers arms
How can I feel these things
When you could never feel them back
Ripped from my grasp
Alone again
Push the pain away
Buried deep inside
A secret shared and kept for a lifetime
So much saddness shared with so much delight
Or maybe its time to just give up the fight,,,

Copyright © Delusions ... [ 2004-09-29 20:14:39]
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Re: GiVe Up ThE FiGhT... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:36:18 PM AEST
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Sad yet,beautifull-n-passonate.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: GiVe Up ThE FiGhT... (User Rating: 1 )
by unforgiven on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 01:16:26 AM AEST
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oooohh!! sweety i realli like this one! can realli relate to this poem and feeling like ur being replaced and all that. keep writing these poems sweety, ur excellent at it.
luv u muchly
becca

Re: GiVe Up ThE FiGhT... (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 08:22:16 AM AEST
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very sad
it touched me

4/5

Re: GiVe Up ThE FiGhT... (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 09:42:53 AM AEST
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I hate it when it's time to give up..I give up so easy...
Great write

Re: GiVe Up ThE FiGhT... (User Rating: 1 )
by fastpitchqt on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 06:40:04 PM AEST
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its so easy to fall but so easy to give them up!! I can totally relate to this...awesome poem!!

Re: GiVe Up ThE FiGhT... (User Rating: 1 )
by tWiStLe on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 02:17:30 AM AEST
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I know who this is about ;) and i know what this is about, and i know the night that this happened.... and yet you never told me about any of it! and you know what? it was all becuz i got sick and went home with my mum :P at one point im happi i did becuz u got to experience this and have it... ad understand why and stuff but then again i feel part guilty becuz it wanst all a positive experience and probably made it worse... but still u got a great write out of it and i feel like giggling to myself becuz in a way the 'other' person that is taking your place dusnt even realise this and in a way shes the one thats getting screwed around with not you.
Love ya hun
xxxxxx

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