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[title] => These people...
[time] => 2004-09-29 20:03:54
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[bodytext] => I see so many everyday
They wear different clothes
And different shades of hurt
They reek of different stench
But the lies are all the same
The false smiles
The way they glare
Ha ha ha the laughs they have...
They only care about themselves
Disregard for others
Because cant respect who they are
Shallow…
Worthless…
Empty…
I pity what you have become
I’m glad that I’m not you
I’m more than you…
Yet you make me feel weak
You make me fearful
You make me who I am
And you still hate this “me”
You still cause pain
You still laugh
What else can I do?
Who else can I be?
How else can I try?
Before you accept me?
Before you respect me…
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These people...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:03:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I see so many everyday
They wear different clothes
And different shades of hurt
They reek of different stench
But the lies are all the same
The false smiles
The way they glare
Ha ha ha the laughs they have...
They only care about themselves
Disregard for others
Because cant respect who they are
Shallow…
Worthless…
Empty…
I pity what you have become
I’m glad that I’m not you
I’m more than you…
Yet you make me feel weak
You make me fearful
You make me who I am
And you still hate this “me”
You still cause pain
You still laugh
What else can I do?
Who else can I be?
How else can I try?
Before you accept me?
Before you respect me…
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2004-09-29 20:03:54]
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Re: These people...
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:13:01 PM AEST
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| having them accept you and respect you isnt needed to live and to get acceptance or respect you might have to pay a high price of regrets later on... |
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Re: These people...
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by pixie on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 05:31:17 AM AEST
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you shouldnt care what others think of you, as you are a lovely person. you can see that from your writes....
an intresting write,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: These people...
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 11:51:26 AM AEST
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| I like the way you wrote this broke it up with the 3 lines in the middle, the raw emotion and a taste of truth made for a good read, thanks for sharing |
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Re: These people...
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 09:21:20 PM AEST
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They will never respect you until they can respect themselves. See people like this all over, on the phone, in the supermarket, everywhere I roam!
So sad really, that they are void of any self-esteem............but stay away.......stay away......or like them you too will become.
Worded very well indeed!
Truthfully and honest to the core.
Lovingcritters
ConSue
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Re: These people...
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by blackholesun on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 12:40:05 PM AEST
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hey sweet,i respect you!for who you are,if you change yourself to the accordance of others likeings you loose my respect,i say if they dont like me than they can all eat ***** and die,but if they do they can depend on this friend,ps can i add you to my buddy list?
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Re: These people...
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 06:49:07 PM AEST
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wow holder this was strong I liked it a lot very deep and questioning I loved it...dont feel this way....
much love,
Dani |
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Re: These people...
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by Onslaught on
Sunday, 3rd October 2004 @ 02:30:25 AM AEST
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| Realizing that you are "more" than these people should be empowering and good enough to make you feel better. These people realize that you are better than they are and this "Disrespect" is their last, desperate, pathetic attempt to make you just like they are, hollow, void of meaning, and sick. Never give in. Grow, learn, seek truth, and always be faithful to your morals and ethics, no matter what. |
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Re: These people...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:32:07 AM AEST
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| The three words in the middle kind of put it together. It's hard feeling isolated in a crowd. Title caught me... I wrote an essay last semester in which I used the phrase "these people" too often and my instructor corrected me. heh. It's fine here though. Nice write! Cheers! |
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