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Array ( [sid] => 65607 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => He Roams [time] => 2004-09-29 18:54:20 [hometext] => About: Someone my father knew for along time who committed suicide a few weeks ago cus he disliked his appearence, the guy always complained he looked like 'raw meat'. [bodytext] => Out of the public cave
he roams in such a raw shape
Unprepared for the worst
they're in disgust by his taste
Despises his own vanity
thus does one last praise
Suddenly he falls
And a rotten figure lays.

Vapid cleanse quartz
spills upon his cheeks
Soon creatures came out in awe
then they licked away the salt
to survive in such a pale emblem
A decomposed forever dreams.

Sunset
eyes closed
Sunrise
closed eyes [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 48 [informant] => x0it [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

He Roams

Contributed by x0it on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:54:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Out of the public cave
he roams in such a raw shape
Unprepared for the worst
they're in disgust by his taste
Despises his own vanity
thus does one last praise
Suddenly he falls
And a rotten figure lays.

Vapid cleanse quartz
spills upon his cheeks
Soon creatures came out in awe
then they licked away the salt
to survive in such a pale emblem
A decomposed forever dreams.

Sunset
eyes closed
Sunrise
closed eyes

Copyright © x0it ... [ 2004-09-29 18:54:20]
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Re: He Roams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 07:27:36 PM AEST
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That is taking vanity waaaaaay too seriously. He definitely need counseling. Seems to me it would have been much easier just to get plastic surgery. Unless you are grotesquely deformed I can't understand being that concerned with outward appearances. Your heart and soul are inside the facade.

Sad,
Rita

Re: He Roams (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 08:40:12 PM AEST
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i agree with reetz. but it was his life to do whatever he wanted to with. ::shrugs::

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