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Array ( [sid] => 65605 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the crush [time] => 2004-09-29 18:26:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i've built you into a temple
with the perfect things you do
i feel so undeserving
as a guest of your company
my emotions slowly consume me
and i steadly fall apart
i never found the words
to tell you how i feel
i like to say your eyes
numbs my common sense
and when you start to speak
i feel a shortness of breath
with each new point
my intelligence disapates
to the shape of your mouth
and the sorrow on your face
i want to make you feel better
but my affection is not a treasure
i fear i'll never know you
or maybe i know to much
how have i infatuated myself
with the thoughts of your love
i thought myself better
than to play these silly games
and in my own self pity
i can see that you’re not concered
not a look nor glance my way
conduct of a friendly swey
how do i show my face
when i want so much more
the depression that burns within
when i see you thinking of him
all the things you like
about my personal character
my polite and open mind
durning our deep conversations
but you never considered
that i could be an option
i couldn't help but laugh
when you said you'd break my heart
shrug it off your shoulders
you've already accompished that
[comments] => 0 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 24 [informant] => stephenamoore [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
the crush

Contributed by stephenamoore on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 06:26:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



i've built you into a temple
with the perfect things you do
i feel so undeserving
as a guest of your company
my emotions slowly consume me
and i steadly fall apart
i never found the words
to tell you how i feel
i like to say your eyes
numbs my common sense
and when you start to speak
i feel a shortness of breath
with each new point
my intelligence disapates
to the shape of your mouth
and the sorrow on your face
i want to make you feel better
but my affection is not a treasure
i fear i'll never know you
or maybe i know to much
how have i infatuated myself
with the thoughts of your love
i thought myself better
than to play these silly games
and in my own self pity
i can see that you’re not concered
not a look nor glance my way
conduct of a friendly swey
how do i show my face
when i want so much more
the depression that burns within
when i see you thinking of him
all the things you like
about my personal character
my polite and open mind
durning our deep conversations
but you never considered
that i could be an option
i couldn't help but laugh
when you said you'd break my heart
shrug it off your shoulders
you've already accompished that




Copyright © stephenamoore ... [ 2004-09-29 18:26:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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