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Array ( [sid] => 65555 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost [time] => 2004-09-29 11:01:48 [hometext] => Just something off the top of my head... I didn't know what kind this would be considered... so I just put it as no topic [bodytext] => I'm lost
Wanting to show everyone who I really am
But not being able to find my way
I can't seem to get out of this hole I'm in
And I can't yell for help
No one can hear me
No one can see me
I'm lost and all alone
Hiding from everyone
Trying to find my way back
But getting lost in the dark as I do
What if I'm never found
What if they never see the real me
What if this person
This image
Is all they ever know
Will I stay lost forever
Or will someone find me
I want to be found
I want the real me to show
I don't want to be lost anymore
But lost is what I am
In this dark hole I've created for myself [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 43 [informant] => jishes_4_ever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Lost

Contributed by jishes_4_ever on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 11:01:48 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I'm lost
Wanting to show everyone who I really am
But not being able to find my way
I can't seem to get out of this hole I'm in
And I can't yell for help
No one can hear me
No one can see me
I'm lost and all alone
Hiding from everyone
Trying to find my way back
But getting lost in the dark as I do
What if I'm never found
What if they never see the real me
What if this person
This image
Is all they ever know
Will I stay lost forever
Or will someone find me
I want to be found
I want the real me to show
I don't want to be lost anymore
But lost is what I am
In this dark hole I've created for myself

Copyright © jishes_4_ever ... [ 2004-09-29 11:01:48]
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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 12:16:38 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this. I can sense the pain. I know you have heard this, the only way you can get out of that lost is coming out of it yourself. I truly believe with support and help from people who care about you this can happen. You just have to be willing to let it happen.

Take care of yourself.

Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 10:34:34 PM AEST
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excellent write. well i was going to say you can never be lost, but i dont think i can back up what i say because i was even confusing myself, lol.

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