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Array ( [sid] => 65520 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Der Metzgermeister [time] => 2004-09-28 22:57:32 [hometext] => inspired by a line from a rammstein song. scrawl written in english. [bodytext] => small kisses
soft
like (tender meat) feathers
cast from angel wings

rough fingers trace
soft skin (so lean)
caressing your navel
so cute
a tease
(an entry)

and as i smile up
at bound wrists
and tear-smeared mascara
i ask
so softly,

"would you?
would you like to see?
would you like to see what's inside?
.......inside of you"

i long to take your gag away
dearly love to hear your screams
wide frightened eyes
eclipse your face
as i reveal scalpel and cleaver

carefully
incision made
from between your breasts
to your navel
a new hole
a new slit
perfect for me to....

eager fingers ease you open
blood loss still minor
as you stare down
inside yourself

my hands in you
massaging organs
grasping vertebrae
blood pouring out
as your heart races

i barely notice when you die

dizzy with arousal
as your life stains me red to the wrist
excited grunts escape me
as i probe your entrails

taking stock
a nice rack of ribs
and a succulent rump roast
to be displayed in my window tomorrow
the rest to be discarded
but not before i replace the balance of vitality
spilling a million tiny lives inside you
to pay for the one large life i ended

(i love you for what's on the inside)
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Der Metzgermeister

Contributed by Cancer on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 10:57:32 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



small kisses
soft
like (tender meat) feathers
cast from angel wings

rough fingers trace
soft skin (so lean)
caressing your navel
so cute
a tease
(an entry)

and as i smile up
at bound wrists
and tear-smeared mascara
i ask
so softly,

"would you?
would you like to see?
would you like to see what's inside?
.......inside of you"

i long to take your gag away
dearly love to hear your screams
wide frightened eyes
eclipse your face
as i reveal scalpel and cleaver

carefully
incision made
from between your breasts
to your navel
a new hole
a new slit
perfect for me to....

eager fingers ease you open
blood loss still minor
as you stare down
inside yourself

my hands in you
massaging organs
grasping vertebrae
blood pouring out
as your heart races

i barely notice when you die

dizzy with arousal
as your life stains me red to the wrist
excited grunts escape me
as i probe your entrails

taking stock
a nice rack of ribs
and a succulent rump roast
to be displayed in my window tomorrow
the rest to be discarded
but not before i replace the balance of vitality
spilling a million tiny lives inside you
to pay for the one large life i ended

(i love you for what's on the inside)




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2004-09-28 22:57:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Der Metzgermeister (User Rating: 1 )
by PsychoticDreamz on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:15:39 PM AEST
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Awesome poem, truly a masterpiece. Especially the style. I loved it all. Just the kind of poetry I love. My mouth waters just thinking of the new delectable roast. Keep'em coming!

-Psych


Re: Der Metzgermeister (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 11:59:54 PM AEST
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nice write, it has some awsome imagery

l8r

Ninja Tycz


Re: Der Metzgermeister (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 04:24:43 PM AEST
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Rammstein, hell yea! Badass band as well as poem.

"spilling a million tiny lives inside you
to pay for the one large life i ended"

Amazing line.


Re: Der Metzgermeister (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:26:27 PM AEST
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how terribly disturbing I love how you portray
the emotions of every poem so clearly. You
had a reality to your poems that is diffucult to
do especially since there so unreal.
Awesome poem Roy.

Bobo (Joel)




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