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you dont show what you feel
i know the truth
your pain is so real

you hide your identity
as if at a masquerade ball
you think you can deal with it alone
that is what will cause you to fall

overcome your fear
voice your pain
its the only thing you can do
if you want to end this rein

i love you to much to let this continue
darling girl, you must speak
let it all out
to recieve the help you seek

create a revalation
welcome sweet relief to wash ou the past
create a new future
a life to last

please dear girl
quickly speak
dont let anything stop you
its time to reach happienesse's peak [comments] => 3 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 48 [informant] => brokensoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Speak (Dedicated to Cari)

Contributed by brokensoul on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 02:24:01 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

your tounge is twisted
you dont show what you feel
i know the truth
your pain is so real

you hide your identity
as if at a masquerade ball
you think you can deal with it alone
that is what will cause you to fall

overcome your fear
voice your pain
its the only thing you can do
if you want to end this rein

i love you to much to let this continue
darling girl, you must speak
let it all out
to recieve the help you seek

create a revalation
welcome sweet relief to wash ou the past
create a new future
a life to last

please dear girl
quickly speak
dont let anything stop you
its time to reach happienesse's peak

Copyright © brokensoul ... [ 2004-09-28 14:24:01]
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Re: Speak (Dedicated to Cari) (User Rating: 1 )
by poetic_ire on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 03:56:52 PM AEST
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I didn't know Cari was going through all that. That's so sad. She's so quiet too.

She needs to voice and speak up everything. Twenty Bucks there are a lot of people who would listen.

Our family rocks like that. ^_^

Re: Speak (Dedicated to Cari) (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 05:16:46 PM AEST
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fantastic write.

Re: Speak (Dedicated to Cari) (User Rating: 1 )
by shattered_heart on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 02:39:45 PM AEST
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I can really relate, only the thing was that when I started to voice my pain to my family, I got kicked out. Hopefully that won't happen to her, but I think alot of people can relate to what's happening within their family life too.
Good write.

-Rachelle

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