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[sid] => 65443
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Rain
[time] => 2004-09-28 12:55:34
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[bodytext] => the rain's alright
it cools the burn
and drowns my fright
and hides the tears
that are falling
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 181
[topic] => 48
[informant] => gee
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[ratings] => 2
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[associated] =>
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Rain
Contributed by
gee
on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:55:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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the rain's alright
it cools the burn
and drowns my fright
and hides the tears
that are falling
Copyright ©
gee
... [
2004-09-28 12:55:34]
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Re: Rain
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:56:55 PM AEST
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| i give you a comment only because you entitled it rain and i happen to love rain. the title drug me in to read...and all in all a good write. |
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Re: Rain
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 01:00:09 PM AEST
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beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Rain
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 01:03:08 PM AEST
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awwww such a lovely write , I love poems about the rain, but hate the actual rain (well I do live in the UK) lol
pixie xx |
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Re: Rain
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 01:15:17 PM AEST
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I... too... love rain... a slow rain... not one that's a gully washer or one that has wind associated... like a drizzle...
I always said the rain eminded me of God's teardrops for the world... how sad He is to see ppl doing things that grieve His heart... and He sens His teardrops down to wash it all away and renew the earth and ppl.
That's just my thoughts on the subject... u did a fantastic job with this poem... keep wriing...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Rain
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by poetmarie on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 01:17:13 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. Good rhthym - it's reads like a raindrop falling. |
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Re: Rain
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by Alovinmann on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 01:48:42 PM AEST
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| sweet |
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Re: Rain
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 01:50:18 PM AEST
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always something cleansing about the rain nicely written
Michelle |
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Re: Rain
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 05:21:16 PM AEST
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| great write =] |
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