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Uneventful even after the fullest of days
Short and sweet just to pull
For his mind could have never been this full

Submission lost to the exodus, as broken as a forgotten child
But inside burning, the exodus grows wild
An uncertain answer that lies in wait
Realizing the motive and the exodus accepts his fate

But through the dream, our exodus lay still
Beaten and forgotten, but holding always the greatest of will
Tattered and broken, we find him there
Lost in an echo, life's incomprehensible stare

The exodus lays in it's dream
As exodus' aren't always what they seem
Genius as the exodus was
The exodus grew sad again, just as it always does

But, awaken from the footsteps they always place
Nightmares love to chase him, but he never makes haste
For inside the exodus is the greatest of will
And inside thereafter, the exodus will dream even still
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Exodus (continued)

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:49:12 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Tactful as the exodus lays
Uneventful even after the fullest of days
Short and sweet just to pull
For his mind could have never been this full

Submission lost to the exodus, as broken as a forgotten child
But inside burning, the exodus grows wild
An uncertain answer that lies in wait
Realizing the motive and the exodus accepts his fate

But through the dream, our exodus lay still
Beaten and forgotten, but holding always the greatest of will
Tattered and broken, we find him there
Lost in an echo, life's incomprehensible stare

The exodus lays in it's dream
As exodus' aren't always what they seem
Genius as the exodus was
The exodus grew sad again, just as it always does

But, awaken from the footsteps they always place
Nightmares love to chase him, but he never makes haste
For inside the exodus is the greatest of will
And inside thereafter, the exodus will dream even still

Copyright © Exodus-On-Life ... [ 2004-09-28 00:49:12]
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