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carries in on the wind in your soul
Her hair the color of the enchanted sunset
Her eyes reflecting the colors of ocean

She dances in delight around the shallow pond
The colors spinning as her heart
lets free of childhood delight

The feeling of the dream smothers her
She spins in the small clearing,
the blazing beautiful colors of the forest
flood her mind with a chaos of colors

She cares not for the harshness of the world
She is free and carefree of the trails of life
For she is dancing with the angels.
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Dancing with the Angels

Contributed by poetic_ire on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:17:30 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

The soft giggle of her laugh
carries in on the wind in your soul
Her hair the color of the enchanted sunset
Her eyes reflecting the colors of ocean

She dances in delight around the shallow pond
The colors spinning as her heart
lets free of childhood delight

The feeling of the dream smothers her
She spins in the small clearing,
the blazing beautiful colors of the forest
flood her mind with a chaos of colors

She cares not for the harshness of the world
She is free and carefree of the trails of life
For she is dancing with the angels.

Copyright © poetic_ire ... [ 2004-09-27 22:17:30]
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Re: Dancing with the Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:28:01 PM AEST
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This was so sad but beautiful it reminds me of my mom she suffered so much & couldnt walk or dance when she passed now I know shes dancing with Angels! Christina

Re: Dancing with the Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:54:11 PM AEST
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excellent write.

Re: Dancing with the Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:26:23 AM AEST
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heavenly beautifull write.
luv, huggs, smiles, angels,
emy

Re: Dancing with the Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by unforgiven on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 08:08:59 AM AEST
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excellent poem with a great amount of emotion being conveyed through it. i really enjoyed reading this one. please read mine because i would love to know what u thought of them.
unforgiven

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