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Array ( [sid] => 65359 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => - I Hope Your Happy- [time] => 2004-09-27 18:36:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I saw you the other day,
I hope your doing well,
It seems that your getting along,
Since your with her I mean.

I hope life's treating you good,
And I hope she treats you good too,
I hope that she's better than I was,
Because that's why your with her, isn't it?

I hope your happy with her,
And that you have fun too,
I hope she has fun with you,
Because I know I used to.

I hope she enjoys the way you smile,
After you hear a joke,
Because when you used to smile at me,
It always made me wanna melt right there.

I hope he loves your eyes,
Your beautiful hazel eyes,
Because when I used to look in them,
I knew you loved me and in your eyes is where I belonged.

I hope that you made the right decision,
Because if your happy, So am I,
But I just want you to know,
This decision you made,
Is tearing me up inside.

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- I Hope Your Happy-

Contributed by starryskyez09 on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 06:36:49 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I saw you the other day,
I hope your doing well,
It seems that your getting along,
Since your with her I mean.

I hope life's treating you good,
And I hope she treats you good too,
I hope that she's better than I was,
Because that's why your with her, isn't it?

I hope your happy with her,
And that you have fun too,
I hope she has fun with you,
Because I know I used to.

I hope she enjoys the way you smile,
After you hear a joke,
Because when you used to smile at me,
It always made me wanna melt right there.

I hope he loves your eyes,
Your beautiful hazel eyes,
Because when I used to look in them,
I knew you loved me and in your eyes is where I belonged.

I hope that you made the right decision,
Because if your happy, So am I,
But I just want you to know,
This decision you made,
Is tearing me up inside.

Copyright © starryskyez09 ... [ 2004-09-27 18:36:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: - I Hope Your Happy- (User Rating: 1 )
by InnerBeautyQueen on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 07:02:13 PM AEST
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iu8T7I6894HT&^%a*&6uyg!!!
it has to get better though, right?

i love your poem

Re: - I Hope Your Happy- (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:04:17 AM AEST
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Hey gurl, I LOVED this poem, it was very very sad... but you played it off as you were happy, this poem is great, Good Write !!!!

Re: - I Hope Your Happy- (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 01:41:50 AM AEST
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Desperately sad - a hollow happy

But a great write....

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