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wishing we didn't tonight
feeling lathargic and sick
longing for energy to come quick
feeling angry inside
he just wants to hide
regretting what happened
our lives are saddened
longing to be close again
he walks away and we're in pain
I try to speek but he won't look at me
for about a week I'm history
I feel like a blocked drain
the fight I remember leaves a horrible stain
other couples happy makes me so envious
thinking do they ever fight or is it just us?
at last we're talking
only in that dry uncomfortable tone
yet we answer happy when someone rings on the phone
at night we touch and finally forgive
saying we'll never fight lets be friends as long as we both shall live!

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Fights Should Not Have Been Invented!

Contributed by inoc on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:42:08 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

We just had a fight
wishing we didn't tonight
feeling lathargic and sick
longing for energy to come quick
feeling angry inside
he just wants to hide
regretting what happened
our lives are saddened
longing to be close again
he walks away and we're in pain
I try to speek but he won't look at me
for about a week I'm history
I feel like a blocked drain
the fight I remember leaves a horrible stain
other couples happy makes me so envious
thinking do they ever fight or is it just us?
at last we're talking
only in that dry uncomfortable tone
yet we answer happy when someone rings on the phone
at night we touch and finally forgive
saying we'll never fight lets be friends as long as we both shall live!

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-09-27 00:42:08]
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Re: Fights Should Not Have Been Invented! (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:06:26 AM AEST
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very descriptive, it conveys the emotions of a fight with someone u love, and it expresses them well gj.

SM

Re: Fights Should Not Have Been Invented! (User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 07:12:24 AM AEST
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Very nicely portrayed.made me feel sad and I share a lot of your feelings

TY
Kell x

Re: Fights Should Not Have Been Invented! (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:32:30 AM AEST
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I know how you feel Inoc, I used to argue all the time....I guess I was so dam stubborn i just couldnt let it go........but that was such along time ago, now there is only me....makes arguing kinda onesided.
Cheers for sahring this poem it is one I can strongly relate too.

Re: Fights Should Not Have Been Invented! (User Rating: 1 )
by free2you on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 10:35:51 AM AEST
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Great..A blocked drain...couples make you envious..I understand that completely...and that dry uncomfortable tone..yes!!! great....

Re: Fights Should Not Have Been Invented! (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 02:16:20 PM AEST
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True to life and yes everyone fights

Re: Fights Should Not Have Been Invented! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 07:43:03 PM AEST
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awwww... sad... but sweet ending:) hugs n' love nessa

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