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Array ( [sid] => 65290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => U Stood There [time] => 2004-09-26 22:49:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My hearts apart
It’s on the floor
Scattered in pieces
With nothing more

Pick um up
Or let um fall
Whad you do
Nothing at all

You stood there
My heart it bleeds
Every painful
memories

You stood and watched
With out a care
And know I wonder
Why your there

Is it funny
Watching me
Going through
This insanity

My heart it yearned
For something more
But all it got
Was a slamming door [comments] => 2 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 32 [informant] => tractorbabe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
U Stood There

Contributed by tractorbabe on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:49:49 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



My hearts apart
It’s on the floor
Scattered in pieces
With nothing more

Pick um up
Or let um fall
Whad you do
Nothing at all

You stood there
My heart it bleeds
Every painful
memories

You stood and watched
With out a care
And know I wonder
Why your there

Is it funny
Watching me
Going through
This insanity

My heart it yearned
For something more
But all it got
Was a slamming door




Copyright © tractorbabe ... [ 2004-09-26 22:49:49]
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Re: U Stood There (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:10:45 AM AEST
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Yet another master piece by such an awesome poet and I am so hungry for more of you. You have this awesome ability to reach inside of your readers so deeply and touch their soul. Great Job. Your Reading Fan MickeyPigKnuckles :o)


Re: U Stood There (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:47:38 AM AEST
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Another master peice, I hope my comment dosent sound cold or heartless in anyway, it just your poems, remind me of past hurts, and they are composed with raw feeling and an awesome inner talent,you paint such vivid images, to the point I feel what the hurt is doing too you, Anyhows thank you for sharing this poem of yours.




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