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Array ( [sid] => 65286 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Encouraging Them Meteorite Children [time] => 2004-09-26 22:10:49 [hometext] => From my collection Emeralds Are My Days [bodytext] => Fragments of
Wishful thoughts
Translucent &
Drained no
One's noticed
The look
Of a
Face
Wearing vexation
Times tables
No matter
How able
It remains unstable

No matter how able it remains unstable
Depictions of surrogate dictions
Then: a grasp that is a vivid off-white
(Drained as previously explained)
Inscribes an introspective structure
Providing testament against animal carnage
So animals don't get bargains [comments] => 4 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 49 [informant] => Lee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

Encouraging Them Meteorite Children

Contributed by Lee on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 10:10:49 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

Fragments of
Wishful thoughts
Translucent &
Drained no
One's noticed
The look
Of a
Face
Wearing vexation
Times tables
No matter
How able
It remains unstable

No matter how able it remains unstable
Depictions of surrogate dictions
Then: a grasp that is a vivid off-white
(Drained as previously explained)
Inscribes an introspective structure
Providing testament against animal carnage
So animals don't get bargains

Copyright © Lee ... [ 2004-09-26 22:10:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Encouraging Them Meteorite Children (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 07:17:33 AM AEST
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You say that my message was unclear!!
lol, i mean, i was going to say, poetry does
have to have a meaning
many of mine are riddles of my life
which, i to cannot grasp lol
But i couldnt grasp this..
It was very interesting and somewhat appealing

Re: Encouraging Them Meteorite Children (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 07:18:27 AM AEST
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poetry doesnt have to have a meaning / message (i meant)

Re: Encouraging Them Meteorite Children (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 08:57:20 AM AEST
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You have a freaky way with words, but have to admit, I am at a loss on this one :( I mean no slight to the author, guess me just to dumb to see through the words.

Re: Encouraging Them Meteorite Children (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 09:14:37 AM AEST
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creepy write.
i liked it. i like your style of writing. its different no one else that i know of uses it and thats what makes it special.
youve got alot of talent lee. dont let anyone every tell you different.
5 stars
Arden

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