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So disconnected

Your a little girl
On her way home from school
With a backpack more
Then half her size

It’s all so different
The way the light hits it
You shouldn't have to think
About everything that you say
But still so much is wrong
With the way that you say it

Everyone else in the world
Is getting ready for Friday night
And I'm still stuck on Tuesday
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operator

Contributed by megan on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:05:26 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

You’re so out of place
So disconnected

Your a little girl
On her way home from school
With a backpack more
Then half her size

It’s all so different
The way the light hits it
You shouldn't have to think
About everything that you say
But still so much is wrong
With the way that you say it

Everyone else in the world
Is getting ready for Friday night
And I'm still stuck on Tuesday

Copyright Â© megan ... [ 2004-09-26 21:05:26]
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Re: operator (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:53:21 PM AEST
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I'm guessing your in high school and you feel out of place amongst everyone...I may be wrong,but if I'm not,don't worry,high school sucks,but the rest is great.THEN,your life really starts,you create it according to your needs and dreams.Don't give up,Friday will come. =)
PumpkinPie

Re: operator (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:54:58 PM AEST
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feels like im the one carrying the backpack ::sigh::

Re: operator (User Rating: 1 )
by whoelse on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:59:05 PM AEST
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wow lots of emotion...i like the way you wrote it

Re: operator (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 12:05:01 AM AEST
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Such a beautifully composed poem by a very intelligent poet. Change is a hard adaption and everyone needs a gentle loving push from time to time to find their grove. You are awesome and your style is wonderful. Great write. Please have a peek at some of mine and let me know. Your friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o)

Re: operator (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:41:59 AM AEST
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I do enjoy your write....beautifully written
I think I know what you mean and....
I'm sure we have all been through it sometime in our lives

cheers!~

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