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Array ( [sid] => 65264 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide [time] => 2004-09-26 19:40:35 [hometext] => ...ainti suicide,i've entered a contest and i'm submitting this,tell me what u think!enjoy!! [bodytext] => it's not the way
it shouldn't happen today
it shouldnt happen at all
i don't want to watch them fall

everyone can be free
just look at me
everyone has something to say
don't take it to heart,not today

suicide,it's just not cool
suicide,don't be a fool
suicide,theres more to life
suicide,don't look at the knife

with the look of beath in their eyes
they feel they're nothing,i hope they realize
that life is not about death
it's about making your future,poor little beth

being a victim isn't great
it's not their fate
they're not in the right state of mind
victims can be so blind

somethings happen in everone's life
but theres no need to pick up the knife
commiting suicide is just not right
commiting suicide means you're weak [comments] => 4 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 36 [informant] => savedbydeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Suicide

Contributed by savedbydeath on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:40:35 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



it's not the way
it shouldn't happen today
it shouldnt happen at all
i don't want to watch them fall

everyone can be free
just look at me
everyone has something to say
don't take it to heart,not today

suicide,it's just not cool
suicide,don't be a fool
suicide,theres more to life
suicide,don't look at the knife

with the look of beath in their eyes
they feel they're nothing,i hope they realize
that life is not about death
it's about making your future,poor little beth

being a victim isn't great
it's not their fate
they're not in the right state of mind
victims can be so blind

somethings happen in everone's life
but theres no need to pick up the knife
commiting suicide is just not right
commiting suicide means you're weak




Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2004-09-26 19:40:35]
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Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:15:15 PM AEST
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very nice, but the last line just doesnt fit in because of the rhyme scheme. i hope you win your contest. =]


Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:15:34 PM AEST
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very nice, but the last line just doesnt fit in because of the rhyme scheme. i hope you win your contest. =]


Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by lilracer37 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 04:02:00 PM AEST
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its good, they were right the last line doesnt fit


Re: Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Sunday, 31st October 2004 @ 05:29:50 PM AEST
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i like dis oooo ur good :) they might be weak in ways but they gotta be sumwhat stong to even think about doin it but yea suicide is a weak way to get outta life




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