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tight stiff skin
gee my life
should only begin
oh the pain
of arthritus
I just wish
it was just a virus
rub the lotion
take the pill
that is all there is
but keep working can't be still
maybe a cure
is around the corner
you never know
invented by your daughter!
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Arthritus

Contributed by inoc on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 06:38:27 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

crippling fingers
tight stiff skin
gee my life
should only begin
oh the pain
of arthritus
I just wish
it was just a virus
rub the lotion
take the pill
that is all there is
but keep working can't be still
maybe a cure
is around the corner
you never know
invented by your daughter!

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-09-26 06:38:27]
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Re: Arthritus (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:13:10 AM AEST
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Woah Cool poem Inoc, know how ya feel, with all accidents through sports the doc has already said I'll have athritis in a few years, tomany bones broken...well Im hoping he will be wrong myself.
Cheers for the awesome read, A real insight.
Take care

Re: Arthritus (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:37:34 AM AEST
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Poet at Industrial Colosseums Unbound
Says:

Verrry unique topic!

Well written combo of free verse and rhymed,
with my favorite line being:
"invented by your daughter!"

Jolly Good Show!

Re: Arthritus (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 09:57:07 AM AEST
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very cute and i hope for her sake it would happen, she sure would be rich in many ways but most important is all the people she would help/

Re: Arthritus (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:24:20 AM AEST
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I know whatcha mean inoc I have really bad athritis myself and sometimes the pain is so horrible even the pills don't seem to help at times. Great write

Brandy

Re: Arthritus (User Rating: 1 )
by tifrob on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 01:28:02 AM AEST
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I for one would love for the cure to be found today. Great Poem.

J~

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