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Array ( [sid] => 6518 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The heavenly door [time] => 2002-11-11 06:00:00 [hometext] => What happens when we get to the door of heaven! [bodytext] => I am standing at this door,
Where I never stood before,
I'm wondering where this is,
Was there something more to this,
I looked up, I looked down,
But noticed I was'nt standing on ground,
A man came to me with this to say,
I carried you here,now you must stay,
Your life on earth is now no more,
Your standing at Gods heavenly door,
He will love you like no other man,
He took your pains,from his holy hand,
Now come on in,and rest a while,
This is Heaven,where all can smile,
So all your troubles are left down there,
This is this place,who all must care.
The man walked with me and took my hand,
As I told him,Now I understand,
But I can still see my family,
Yes he said for eternity,
God took your pains,and brought you here,
Living in peace,and having no fear,
Your family understands,where you are,
They'll always know you wont be far!





[comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 24 [informant] => LOWMAN613 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
The heavenly door

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



I am standing at this door,
Where I never stood before,
I'm wondering where this is,
Was there something more to this,
I looked up, I looked down,
But noticed I was'nt standing on ground,
A man came to me with this to say,
I carried you here,now you must stay,
Your life on earth is now no more,
Your standing at Gods heavenly door,
He will love you like no other man,
He took your pains,from his holy hand,
Now come on in,and rest a while,
This is Heaven,where all can smile,
So all your troubles are left down there,
This is this place,who all must care.
The man walked with me and took my hand,
As I told him,Now I understand,
But I can still see my family,
Yes he said for eternity,
God took your pains,and brought you here,
Living in peace,and having no fear,
Your family understands,where you are,
They'll always know you wont be far!









Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2002-11-11 06:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The heavenly door (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 06:22:44 AM AEST
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This is absolutely
beautiful, i really enjoyed
this one, you made it such
a beautiful way to imagine
what it would be like in heaven
It gave me chillbumps!!!
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: The heavenly door (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 06:59:20 AM AEST
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wonderful write, the light of heaven is pure white, I'll send you a private message, in awhile,


Re: The heavenly door (User Rating: 1 )
by kimbo on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 08:58:24 AM AEST
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wow what a great write, if only it could be like that down here wouldn't it be a heavenly place to live for us all
keep up the good work.




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