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Array ( [sid] => 65177 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rapping in the Shower [time] => 2004-09-26 00:36:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The house is quiet
Like my heart
It's always the same
When we're apart

I know, baby, I know

You can leave me now
I'll be alright
This solitude
Is a familiar sight

Still I rise
Still I rise
Still
I
Rise

Little ol' me
With nothing to say
Ragged ol' me
Can't run away

I know you think I need the bright lights
Everybody knows my mind
It's got me all tied up inside
These words I cannot find

Can't keep up the cruisin'
Can't go back to boozin'
Can't keep up the lyin'
Don't want to keep on tryin'

Still

Bob Dylan sings to me tonight
"Don't think twice"
Baby
"It's alright"
Baby
Gonna love you all night
Anyway
No matter what
All the people
Say
I told you so

But, I know, baby, I know
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Rapping in the Shower

Contributed by lastwaltz on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 12:36:46 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

The house is quiet
Like my heart
It's always the same
When we're apart

I know, baby, I know

You can leave me now
I'll be alright
This solitude
Is a familiar sight

Still I rise
Still I rise
Still
I
Rise

Little ol' me
With nothing to say
Ragged ol' me
Can't run away

I know you think I need the bright lights
Everybody knows my mind
It's got me all tied up inside
These words I cannot find

Can't keep up the cruisin'
Can't go back to boozin'
Can't keep up the lyin'
Don't want to keep on tryin'

Still

Bob Dylan sings to me tonight
"Don't think twice"
Baby
"It's alright"
Baby
Gonna love you all night
Anyway
No matter what
All the people
Say
I told you so

But, I know, baby, I know

Copyright © lastwaltz ... [ 2004-09-26 00:36:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Rapping in the Shower (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 01:38:46 AM AEST
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Cool poem, written like you were singing to someone, well done awesome to read.

Re: Rapping in the Shower (User Rating: 1 )
by Somnium on Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 02:58:15 PM AEST
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Good write
liked it

Ben
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