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Array ( [sid] => 65129 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Love [time] => 2004-09-25 16:27:18 [hometext] => Juat got to thinking about a person... I love with all my heart... and wish I could see again... comments welcomed... [bodytext] => I could write a thousand words...
Upon a thousand more...
They would never be enough...
To satisify this love
Or they would never be able to explain...
How deep this love for you really runs

You're in my life somehow...
Since that first day I met you...
I've carried you everywhere I go...
So... you and I are never alone...
We're always together... in each other's hearts

You're always in my heart...
You're always upon my mind...
'Cause I think of you... both day and night
You're my candle in the darkness
When I get lost in this love...
Where there's no light to be found
I have your memory to wrap around
To keep me safe and warm...
When loneliness abounds

This pain I feel deep inside of me...
Oh... it won't cease...
'Til I see you again...
And hold you in my arms and then...
Tell you everything is going to be all right...
'Cause I know the hell you've been through...
These past few months...
I can see it in your beautiful eyes...
And hear it quiver in your voice...
As you try and hide... all the feelings hidden deep inside

I could write a thousand words...
Upon a thousand more...
They would never be enough...
To satisify this love
Or they would never be able to explain...
How deep this love for you really runs

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This Love

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:27:18 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I could write a thousand words...
Upon a thousand more...
They would never be enough...
To satisify this love
Or they would never be able to explain...
How deep this love for you really runs

You're in my life somehow...
Since that first day I met you...
I've carried you everywhere I go...
So... you and I are never alone...
We're always together... in each other's hearts

You're always in my heart...
You're always upon my mind...
'Cause I think of you... both day and night
You're my candle in the darkness
When I get lost in this love...
Where there's no light to be found
I have your memory to wrap around
To keep me safe and warm...
When loneliness abounds

This pain I feel deep inside of me...
Oh... it won't cease...
'Til I see you again...
And hold you in my arms and then...
Tell you everything is going to be all right...
'Cause I know the hell you've been through...
These past few months...
I can see it in your beautiful eyes...
And hear it quiver in your voice...
As you try and hide... all the feelings hidden deep inside

I could write a thousand words...
Upon a thousand more...
They would never be enough...
To satisify this love
Or they would never be able to explain...
How deep this love for you really runs





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Re: This Love (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:50:02 PM AEST
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beautiful poem it expresses alot of feelings and it had nice flow good job.

SM


Re: This Love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 05:30:32 PM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
yo momma,
emy


Re: This Love (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 02:45:36 PM AEST
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Painful.. but a wonderful dedication..
Beautiful poem.
charlotte x_x_x


Re: This Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:38:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem.


Re: This Love (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 10:44:17 PM AEST
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How endearing and precious.............how unique this poem.......I think we all have a love in our heart like this one........and you wrote this for eloquently. I loved the ending best of all....reemphasizing the love you have this person.
Enjoyed this one tremendously!
consue


Re: This Love (User Rating: 1 )
by alliecat on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 10:22:38 PM AEST
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what really sucks is when they stop loving back.....but it sounds as if you have a special love....let your love keep inspiring you to write....i love your poetry




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