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Array ( [sid] => 65124 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Already Gone [time] => 2004-09-25 15:25:23 [hometext] => I wrote this one for an ex that I spent 4 years with that got taken away from me that I still love... I'd love comments on it :) [bodytext] => Why is it
Another day,
And all I can think of is
Your face.
Why won't this
Go away,
How come I can't
Leave it behind.
Why are we always
Back and forth,
Sometimes it's you
And others it's memories.
Picking up
The telephone,
But then reality
Comes crashing down.
What am I
Waiting for,
Of course you are
Already gone. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 22 [informant] => PsykoticDoll [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Already Gone

Contributed by PsykoticDoll on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:25:23 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Why is it
Another day,
And all I can think of is
Your face.
Why won't this
Go away,
How come I can't
Leave it behind.
Why are we always
Back and forth,
Sometimes it's you
And others it's memories.
Picking up
The telephone,
But then reality
Comes crashing down.
What am I
Waiting for,
Of course you are
Already gone.

Copyright © PsykoticDoll ... [ 2004-09-25 15:25:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Already Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:34:57 PM AEST
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It's very obvious that you still love this man, you can feel your emotion and longing. Nice write, I hope it all works out for you

Love Dawny x

Re: Already Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by AbnormalPunk on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:42:04 PM AEST
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oh let me count the times have i read a poem this pathetic .....1....2...3...........50...51...52......... 191....192...192...............368...369...370.......... yah this sounds just like every other lame breakup poem.... sorry to break the news.... but you said you wanted comments.... and you never specified "good" or "bad"
mucho lub
jeremy

Re: Already Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 03:50:57 PM AEST
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Hey... nice write... I working on one ight now that's kinda like this... hopefully when I finish it... it will be somehing I want to post... to share with all of u...
~Donna~

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