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[aid] => mick
[title] => Chained Feelings of Misery
[time] => 2004-09-24 22:06:44
[hometext] => ummm...this is about locking up feelings inside of you and having them release themselves for you to learn to change...
[bodytext] => I can’t bare to hold these feelings inside
To know what is actually going on…
I’ve hidden them behind this door
I locked it and thought they would stay in
They fought so hard to get out
To find the key
But I wanted them so badly to just stay chained to the walls
Left to misery
Leaving me with nothing but happiness
It worked so well
For such a short time
Until they broke free of the chains
And unlocked the door with the knowledge they had of my me…
They slowly crept out from behind that door
Walking around…
Spreading my feelings
Hurting me
Leaving me with nothing but pain
Again they seemed to want to destroy me
But I will not let them this time…
I’ve learned so much in this small amount of time of freedom that owned me
Things can be fixed
And they can be changed
You just have to work at them
And want it to take place more than ever before…
[comments] => 12
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[topic] => 43
[informant] => pyrofungus
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Chained Feelings of Misery
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pyrofungus
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:06:44 PM in AEST
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I can’t bare to hold these feelings inside
To know what is actually going on…
I’ve hidden them behind this door
I locked it and thought they would stay in
They fought so hard to get out
To find the key
But I wanted them so badly to just stay chained to the walls
Left to misery
Leaving me with nothing but happiness
It worked so well
For such a short time
Until they broke free of the chains
And unlocked the door with the knowledge they had of my me…
They slowly crept out from behind that door
Walking around…
Spreading my feelings
Hurting me
Leaving me with nothing but pain
Again they seemed to want to destroy me
But I will not let them this time…
I’ve learned so much in this small amount of time of freedom that owned me
Things can be fixed
And they can be changed
You just have to work at them
And want it to take place more than ever before…
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pyrofungus
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2004-09-24 22:06:44]
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Re: Chained Feelings of Misery
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:09:24 PM AEST
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| excellent write. kind of inspirational. |
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Re: Chained Feelings of Misery
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by Nicole_Rahaman on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:28:23 PM AEST
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Get those feelings out. Don't give up. Good write.
Nicole |
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Re: Chained Feelings of Misery
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by Buggsy on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:30:53 PM AEST
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| I have to agree with Essentially9 on this it is a great poem and it is inspiring. |
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Re: Chained Feelings of Misery
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:32:28 PM AEST
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Written with strength and hope, awesoem I am glad you have found a way to fight.
Cheers for sharing such inspriration and take care always. |
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Re: Chained Feelings of Misery
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by Cenon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:58:25 PM AEST
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Great Write i really liked how you have a gift for expressing your innerself "Poetry is expression of your thought and feelings captured into words." -Cenon (Lauren Hughes)
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Re: Chained Feelings of Misery
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 02:56:19 AM AEST
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Awesome writing.
Hang tuff, my friend.
Keep the faith,
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Chained Feelings of Misery
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:48:13 AM AEST
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A very meaningful write; and hope springs eternal when we don't give up. Expressing our feelings frees us up to go on with the present; and not be mired down with unfinished business of the past.
Good write with wisdom, Willofree |
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Re: Chained Feelings of Misery
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by srugglingyoungster on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 11:04:10 AM AEST
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| very strong and emotional, but soooooooo excellent. keep it up. |
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Re: Chained Feelings of Misery
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by AnastasiaN on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:19:13 PM AEST
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| you can totally change your ways as long as you want it bad enough...it can only come from you. good luck and awesome poem |
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Re: Chained Feelings of Misery
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by Kie-Kie on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:51:15 PM AEST
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Wow Summer that was an amazing write...I like how in the end you went to thinking in the positive...
Oh I also want to thank you for commenting on my work *Smiles*
Take Care,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: Chained Feelings of Misery
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by saha on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 12:08:01 PM AEST
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| hey! that's a great poem. Sometimes I feel that I want to be in another world, without all this people who don't understand. You write what is in my soul. |
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Re: Chained Feelings of Misery
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by BuTTerFly_LoVe on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:18:08 AM AEST
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great poem keep it up i loved it.....
UnKnowN BuTtErflY |
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