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Vines
Contributed by
Cenon
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:41:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Wrapped in the vines of hate,
Tied to the wall of truth,
you lie there,
left to choose a path of evil or righteousness.
Copyright ©
Cenon
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2004-09-24 21:41:08]
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Re: Vines
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:46:16 PM AEST
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| short and sweet. powerful write. |
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Re: Vines
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by Lee on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:46:57 PM AEST
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Very crisp.
Like a good bowl of cereal.
Well done! |
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Re: Vines
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:20:00 PM AEST
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Bro this is truly great! We seem to be wrapped and tied down far to much...and confused on which path to take...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Vines
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:03:40 PM AEST
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Coo lwrite short yet with an inner message of choices life sometimes puts in front of paths of trial.
Cheers for the read. |
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