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Where Does the Time Go?
Contributed by
Katie2008
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Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:12:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Jumping through the gaps
Falling through time
Running away from yourself
What happens to the time?
Memories of younger years
Living life with no cares
And brighter times
Then when you get older
You start to see it happen
The time falls through your fingers
The days all bleed together
Time has left you with nothing
As life continues on
You face tougher hardships
And you get to know the feeling of sorrow
Family and friends die
You realize you left your true friends behind
But as you're falling through time
Try to grasp a thread
For tomorrow is never promised
Not to anyone
Copyright ©
Katie2008
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2004-09-24 21:12:22]
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Re: Where Does the Time Go?
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 09:21:38 PM AEST
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| very true. many people just dont understand the concept that tomorrow isnt promised. excellent write. =] |
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Re: Where Does the Time Go?
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:12:08 PM AEST
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awesome life poem, and so true live life here and now for tomorrow may never come to be.
Thanks for sharing such an inspirational poem., take care always. |
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Re: Where Does the Time Go?
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by n2dep2care on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 11:25:25 PM AEST
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Oh, so very true! Emotionally packed and worded. I thought this work was exceptional.
Laurie |
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Re: Where Does the Time Go?
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by emystar on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 01:27:23 AM AEST
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Yeah, I hear ya.
Very true and a masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Where Does the Time Go?
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by Archie on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 07:32:43 PM AEST
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| This is a very good an very true write. |
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Re: Where Does the Time Go?
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by Flipped_out on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 03:36:37 AM AEST
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Ohh you are good...
well written and quite chilling..brilliant write
TY Kell x |
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Re: Where Does the Time Go?
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 30th September 2006 @ 07:02:50 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful poem..
Very good
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