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Array ( [sid] => 65037 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleeding Inside [time] => 2004-09-24 20:08:09 [hometext] => With Nothing to Say, I Leave You to Read. [bodytext] => Bleeding Inside

I always hide
What I feel inside
Killing me till I die
The pain that won't subside

Denying the light
Forgetting about life
Suffering in misery
Till I die

The pain never leaves
Me inside
Consuming me till I bleed
And confide
To the nothingness
That surrounds me
Constantly in life

I let the worse part of me
Consume me till I bleed
While I'm dying on the inside
From the pain that won't subside
All because I couldn't handle life
And these scars pay the price [comments] => 7 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Bleeding Inside

Contributed by Essentially9 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:08:09 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Bleeding Inside

I always hide
What I feel inside
Killing me till I die
The pain that won't subside

Denying the light
Forgetting about life
Suffering in misery
Till I die

The pain never leaves
Me inside
Consuming me till I bleed
And confide
To the nothingness
That surrounds me
Constantly in life

I let the worse part of me
Consume me till I bleed
While I'm dying on the inside
From the pain that won't subside
All because I couldn't handle life
And these scars pay the price

Copyright © Essentially9 ... [ 2004-09-24 20:08:09]
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Re: Bleeding Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:35:16 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful write. I can relate. I hope you're okay. Nice work.
Katie

Re: Bleeding Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:40:17 PM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy

Re: Bleeding Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 10:15:52 PM AEST
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i relate to this very much...I hold in so many things...it seriously kills you inside...great job
summer

Re: Bleeding Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:12:11 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this one. It hurts so bad. Great write.

Re: Bleeding Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 10:07:28 PM AEST
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I hope everything goes well with you. Hang in there. *S* Cynthia

Re: Bleeding Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:27:01 AM AEST
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I can relate to this poem very much and you expressed it so well with your words, keep up the great postings

Re: Bleeding Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:29:33 PM AEST
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wunderbar ^_^

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