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Array ( [sid] => 65 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Haunted [time] => 2002-07-11 09:54:26 [hometext] => I actually wrote this while listening to the song Any Old Actress. Probably one of my favorite because it points out how looks get alot of people places and all that stuff. [bodytext] =>

The candle lights the room
The dim light shows her face.

A brush held in her hand
And she continues where she was.

Posters all around the room
Of who she wishes she could be.

All the glamour and the fame.
And her mirror was dropped on the floor.

It took two words
To break her heart.

It took two words to tear her apart.

Little girls, so innocent and pure
How do they change?
And chat about their form?

Her dark brown hair.
Her deep blue eyes.

Her collection of dolls
And barbies.

All gone.

Just trying to fit
So she let her hair grow.

Not all popular
She doesn't know how she glows.

All it took was two lips
Pressed together and a blow.

The candle went out but she could still light the way.
But as she goes further she will stop.
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Haunted

Contributed by Bjork_Pagan_Poetry on Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 09:54:26 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

The candle lights the room
The dim light shows her face.

A brush held in her hand
And she continues where she was.

Posters all around the room
Of who she wishes she could be.

All the glamour and the fame.
And her mirror was dropped on the floor.

It took two words
To break her heart.

It took two words to tear her apart.

Little girls, so innocent and pure
How do they change?
And chat about their form?

Her dark brown hair.
Her deep blue eyes.

Her collection of dolls
And barbies.

All gone.

Just trying to fit
So she let her hair grow.

Not all popular
She doesn't know how she glows.

All it took was two lips
Pressed together and a blow.

The candle went out but she could still light the way.
But as she goes further she will stop.

Copyright © Bjork_Pagan_Poetry ... [ 2002-07-11 09:54:26]
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Re: Haunted (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 05:34:53 AM AEST
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nice, great write.

jackee_line

Re: Haunted (User Rating: 1 )
by Menelaus on Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 11:24:25 AM AEST
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Is it about how a girl grows up to womanhood in a turbulent and hostile atmosphere?

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