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Array ( [sid] => 6491 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ***I Won't*** [time] => 2002-11-10 10:30:00 [hometext] => This poem just came to mind so i wrote it... [bodytext] => It was a time when you filled my life with joy
We would sit and talk about how our lives would be
We would go out to malls, parties, or just chill at home and watch movies
Why do I feel all that’s being destroyed?

Everything! Right before my eyes!
All of this is really hurting me
But my pain is just one of the things you refuse to see
That must be the main reason you ignore every one of my cries

You act like you can’t hold my hand no more when we walk
Now you think about how people stare?
Its making men notice me even more, but I can’t tell you care
Then when I bring up something like that, I hear your famous phrase, “Don’t worry, we’ll talk…”

I don’t even know why I still tell you I love you
From the way you leave me at home I see I shouldn’t have any trust
You say you’ll shoot a man for looking at me wrong, but we know a nut is the only thing you’ll bust!
Having sex is all you be wanting to do

I remember you telling me Ginuwine can’t be as stingy as you is with me
That’s something I can’t tell
Something I can tell is that you don’t want me no more because you show it so well
I love it but I hate how you believe I’ll stay longer just because you get on your knees

I knew you was too good to be true
Loving you stayed on my mind
Now when search, love for you is the one thing I don’t find
I’m ready to move on, but I don’t know if I’m ready for someone new

I can’t blame you for me falling so fast
I blame me for being so stupid. I was so dumb
Now and days you don’t spend all of your spare time with me, just some
On your list, when I first came I was on top, but I’m last

Then you think my love cost
Money will never make me feel better
Love hurts. I wonder if we suffered Love’s pain together
I hope you suffer this, all my love is what you lost
I won’t be with you or love you forever
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***I Won't***

Contributed by nay on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



It was a time when you filled my life with joy
We would sit and talk about how our lives would be
We would go out to malls, parties, or just chill at home and watch movies
Why do I feel all that’s being destroyed?

Everything! Right before my eyes!
All of this is really hurting me
But my pain is just one of the things you refuse to see
That must be the main reason you ignore every one of my cries

You act like you can’t hold my hand no more when we walk
Now you think about how people stare?
Its making men notice me even more, but I can’t tell you care
Then when I bring up something like that, I hear your famous phrase, “Don’t worry, we’ll talk…”

I don’t even know why I still tell you I love you
From the way you leave me at home I see I shouldn’t have any trust
You say you’ll shoot a man for looking at me wrong, but we know a nut is the only thing you’ll bust!
Having sex is all you be wanting to do

I remember you telling me Ginuwine can’t be as stingy as you is with me
That’s something I can’t tell
Something I can tell is that you don’t want me no more because you show it so well
I love it but I hate how you believe I’ll stay longer just because you get on your knees

I knew you was too good to be true
Loving you stayed on my mind
Now when search, love for you is the one thing I don’t find
I’m ready to move on, but I don’t know if I’m ready for someone new

I can’t blame you for me falling so fast
I blame me for being so stupid. I was so dumb
Now and days you don’t spend all of your spare time with me, just some
On your list, when I first came I was on top, but I’m last

Then you think my love cost
Money will never make me feel better
Love hurts. I wonder if we suffered Love’s pain together
I hope you suffer this, all my love is what you lost
I won’t be with you or love you forever




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Re: ***I Won't*** (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 10:36:37 AM AEST
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This touched home with
me after my recent experience
with alot of the same situation
here in my life. Great write
I enjoyed reading this, it
helped me alot just reading
it from another's point of view
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: ***I Won't*** (User Rating: 1 )
by Roshie on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 11:53:16 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, it amazing how many people that has happened to, not so much amazing but how depressing life can be. You wrote your feelings of the situation well. I hope all goes well for you in the future.




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