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Array ( [sid] => 64909 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I GOTTA KNOW [time] => 2004-09-23 16:56:18 [hometext] => SADNESS IN THE LOCAL BAR SCENE TOO MANY TIMES TOO MANY NIGHTS....Comments on all my writes and your votes are appreciated! [bodytext] => A pathetic individual acting like a winner
A debutant shaking hands snickering like a sinner
I give a nod
I crack a smile
I'm just checking out the show
My hearts been playing on rewind
Little man it's time to grow

I want to know
Is this reality
I need to know
Some sensability
I've got to know
if I can pass this by
I've have to know
If I should even try
I want to know

A monkey with a beret on
Sitting with a liar
Stories that you've told before
Are getting a little tired
I give a nod
Then crack a smile
I'm just checking out the show
My hearts been playing on rewind
Might be time to go

Tell me is this so
Is it reality
Or just a show
Of some insanity
I think I should
Get up and try
I think I should
I still wonder why
I should just know

Over there's a working girl
She's looking for some tricks
Gotta get them in the alley
Get money for a fix
I give a nod
I crack a smile
I'm just checking out the show
Hearts been playing on rewind
Guess it's time to go [comments] => 4 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 13 [informant] => alovinmann [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
I GOTTA KNOW

Contributed by alovinmann on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:56:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



A pathetic individual acting like a winner
A debutant shaking hands snickering like a sinner
I give a nod
I crack a smile
I'm just checking out the show
My hearts been playing on rewind
Little man it's time to grow

I want to know
Is this reality
I need to know
Some sensability
I've got to know
if I can pass this by
I've have to know
If I should even try
I want to know

A monkey with a beret on
Sitting with a liar
Stories that you've told before
Are getting a little tired
I give a nod
Then crack a smile
I'm just checking out the show
My hearts been playing on rewind
Might be time to go

Tell me is this so
Is it reality
Or just a show
Of some insanity
I think I should
Get up and try
I think I should
I still wonder why
I should just know

Over there's a working girl
She's looking for some tricks
Gotta get them in the alley
Get money for a fix
I give a nod
I crack a smile
I'm just checking out the show
Hearts been playing on rewind
Guess it's time to go




Copyright © alovinmann ... [ 2004-09-23 16:56:18]
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Re: I GOTTA KNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:58:24 PM AEST
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excellent write. interesting style well presented.


Re: I GOTTA KNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 05:16:54 PM AEST
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Excellent write. It is a shame some people have such sad lost lives. Seems they would know there is much more out there to enjoy than that.

Rita


Re: I GOTTA KNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:07:30 PM AEST
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I've have to know
If I should even try
I want to know

I didn't understand this one little bit..maybe a typo?
or do I not get it??? The I've have to know??


Re: I GOTTA KNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:30:39 PM AEST
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this is excellent, it really captures the whole bar/life/lonely sceen, i had to laugh here though lol: A monkey with a beret on/Sitting with a liar creative and funny, keep 'em coming:)

hugs n' love nessa x

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