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I will still be with you.
When all has died and withered.
It will be just us two.
All the stars are falling.
Everything is gone.
Only darkness can be seen.
There will be no dawn.
We'll see the last star fall.
It'll shoot so far.
And will cover all the sky.
For it was the last star.
Now Sun has failed.
And Moon has died.
And stars have all fell:
This is earth's final sigh.
We'll lay down in darkness.
And wait for something to arise. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 49 [informant] => Elayner27 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

Sun Fails and Moon Dies

Contributed by Elayner27 on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:22:53 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

When Sun fails and Moon is dead
I will still be with you.
When all has died and withered.
It will be just us two.
All the stars are falling.
Everything is gone.
Only darkness can be seen.
There will be no dawn.
We'll see the last star fall.
It'll shoot so far.
And will cover all the sky.
For it was the last star.
Now Sun has failed.
And Moon has died.
And stars have all fell:
This is earth's final sigh.
We'll lay down in darkness.
And wait for something to arise.

Copyright © Elayner27 ... [ 2004-09-23 16:22:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sun Fails and Moon Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 04:26:12 PM AEST
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What an insightful message you have created here as it reflects our current reality so clearly. Great Job. Please have a look at some of my creations and leave me a message. Your reading fan MickeyPigKnuckles :o)

Re: Sun Fails and Moon Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 05:04:21 PM AEST
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i loved this. very nice. powerful write.

Re: Sun Fails and Moon Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:05:58 PM AEST
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The Surreal eeL y'know Feel says:

Favorite lines:

"We'll see the last star fall.
It'll shoot so far.
And will cover all the sky.
For it was the last star."

Well done!

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