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Array ( [sid] => 64883 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Message of Questions [time] => 2004-09-23 13:44:22 [hometext] => Jake and me are currently not talking and i am having a nightmare trying to deal with it this is like a message to him full of my questions [bodytext] => your love is so strong
you had to let me go...
for my sake...
because my father was beating me
but it was worth it
instead of hurting occasionally
i am hurting now every second every hour
every day
why?
why did you leave me?
i am so confused
i wont ever love anyone like i love you
its building up inside me
i cant make it stop
its not fair
so much pain
not fair
its so hard to handle
i dont know if i can handle it
what do you do when everything you were living for
just vanishes?
how did you expect me to cope with this?
didnt you think this through?
i cant do this with out you
please
i love you [comments] => 2 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 22 [informant] => brokensoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Message of Questions

Contributed by brokensoul on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:44:22 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



your love is so strong
you had to let me go...
for my sake...
because my father was beating me
but it was worth it
instead of hurting occasionally
i am hurting now every second every hour
every day
why?
why did you leave me?
i am so confused
i wont ever love anyone like i love you
its building up inside me
i cant make it stop
its not fair
so much pain
not fair
its so hard to handle
i dont know if i can handle it
what do you do when everything you were living for
just vanishes?
how did you expect me to cope with this?
didnt you think this through?
i cant do this with out you
please
i love you




Copyright © brokensoul ... [ 2004-09-23 13:44:22]
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Re: Message of Questions (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:53:53 PM AEST
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This is an excellent poem by a very creative poet. When you inject true emotions into your works the end result is perfection and I really appreciate your speaking heart. Please have a peek at some of mine and let me know. Your friend MickeyPigKnuckles :o)


Re: Message of Questions (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 05:04:47 PM AEST
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I love the questions
of this brilliant poem
your a pure natural poet
cheers!




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