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you and me
like waves that don't crash
like a sun that doesn't set
like a walk on the beach-
with no foot prints
it's just a fantasy
like time standing still
like a closk that doesn't tick
like a shadow on the wall-
when there's no person at all
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Fantasy

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

it's a fantasy
you and me
like waves that don't crash
like a sun that doesn't set
like a walk on the beach-
with no foot prints
it's just a fantasy
like time standing still
like a closk that doesn't tick
like a shadow on the wall-
when there's no person at all
it's just a fantasy

Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2002-11-10 06:30:00]
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Re: Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by orgygirl on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 06:32:44 AM AEST
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This is a very clever poem. I enjoyed reading it. Don't give up hope just yet you never what tomorrow might bring. =)

Take care

R.

Re: Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 06:33:44 AM AEST
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This a great write in the fact that at one time or another we all have a fantasy about a person whom we never really have.

Re: Fantasy (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 09:20:12 AM AEST
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I used to have a thing for Kathy Ireland... and Joey from the Backstreet boys... oh yeah... and Chris Farley (God rest his soal)... um.... sorry, but... yeah... later

Re: Fantasy (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 09:21:08 AM AEST
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"like a closk that isn't spelt right"... I like that, you should put it in there

Re: Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 01:31:46 PM AEST
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Hey there is no Joey in the Backstreet Boys. The Backstreet Boys are Brian, Nick, Kevin, Howie, and AJ. I think that you meant *NSYNC. Sorry to correct you but the Backstreet Boys are my favorite band.
ShadowsCloud

Re: Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 09:21:13 AM AEST
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Hmmm Candice,
Fantasies are the sign of a good, healthy mind. But they can also bring dissapointment when one has to realise that they just aren't real!
This reads kinda sad to me, and I like it as it is well written and produced an emotional response in me, which is the point of good poetry after all!

With love
Dean:-)

Re: Fantasy (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 09:35:55 AM AEST
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Dean, that is so true good poetry should bring out emotional responses. I wrote is poem the last time I talk my self out of going for it with Shadow, the guy I love.
ShadowsCloud

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