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Addicted

Contributed by Jeanetta on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:16:12 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



I had this bowl of vanilla ice cream...
smooth and creamy and cool...
sweet.
Whenever I put a spoonful in my mouth
pure ecstacy.
And sometimes it would upset my stomach
As all things sweet taken in too much quantity
often do.
So what can one expect?
My ice cream....
Mmmm, how I love my ice cream.

So one day, I was out shopping...
And I ran across the most sweet
succulent
smooth and creamy
hot fudge I'd ever seen in my life.
I had to taste it.
It was still warm too...
And when I put it in my mouth....
pure ecstacy.
Cause you know I love me some chocolate.

You know what I did?
I had me some hot fudge....
creamy, sweet, and succulent
hot fudge...
with my cool, smooth and creamy
vanilla ice cream.
The combination is intoxicating...
Overwhelming most times.
But what am I to do?
Cuz I love my ice cream
and you know I love me some chocolate.
I can't let go of one or the other.
I'm addicted...




Copyright © Jeanetta ... [ 2004-09-22 22:16:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:25:48 PM AEST
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interesting.


Re: Addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 01:47:28 AM AEST
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What a deligthful write. I chuckled as I read it.
I had to go out and get me some .

Whisper


Re: Addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by Solnubis on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 03:49:41 PM AEST
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I loved the poem. I am a food and sugar addict. I know that sugar and most carbs do harm me and I still reach for it and compulsively overeat it. i have struggled for years with my addiction. It's always triggered on some kind of emotions or a state of being I don't want to confront or deal with. People make it seem so easy when they say just don't have any, or my favorite just have a little of it dear. If it was that easy we wouldn't be seeing so many obese people in this world, I included. Hey a good writing is when you can get a good response from it. Good Writing!
It's nice to see it in a sense of humar persay.


Re: Addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 11:34:03 PM AEST
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lol thats great


Re: Addicted (User Rating: 1 )
by clotti on Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 10:57:09 AM AEST
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really cool write liking it loads made me smile, always great when a poem makes me smile after all the stuff i write! i think at times everyone needs to self-indulge




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