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Array ( [sid] => 6480 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Hell [time] => 2002-11-10 01:00:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Hell is a place where truth isn't heard
where lies wear costumes uniforms and smiles
a place where your instincts cannot be trusted
and black becomes white for one day.
double speak double mint and two more for you too
as the little white lies roll out a red jellyroll carpet
for Santa and Jesus, Queen & country and Judas
illustrious icons of the grand parade of persuasion.
for a place in this book we all lie cheat and steal
and for a second or third look no price will be questioned
while unfitting cogs lay strewn unnoticed on factory floors
each wearing the question that fit them so poorly
why did it happen and why is it like this and why did you
do me and do me and dome and doome andoomeeedoobeedoo
dooobeeedooobeeedoooooooo.
its not supposed to make cents only yens francs and dollars.
ideas ideals information introspection duty honor reflection
noble intentions knowing glances enhancements romantic enchantments confusion tears and no place to escape to
when their all nailed to a cross in your honor.
tears held back by a society damned
and internal screams deafen eyes pounded into submission
egos hide behind bruised and beaten reflections
of men who howled for the nighttime and now howl on their own time
unwanted unfinished unknown unwillingly silent in slow deaths
unloving caress.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 13 [informant] => KM [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Hell

Contributed by KM on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Hell is a place where truth isn't heard
where lies wear costumes uniforms and smiles
a place where your instincts cannot be trusted
and black becomes white for one day.
double speak double mint and two more for you too
as the little white lies roll out a red jellyroll carpet
for Santa and Jesus, Queen & country and Judas
illustrious icons of the grand parade of persuasion.
for a place in this book we all lie cheat and steal
and for a second or third look no price will be questioned
while unfitting cogs lay strewn unnoticed on factory floors
each wearing the question that fit them so poorly
why did it happen and why is it like this and why did you
do me and do me and dome and doome andoomeeedoobeedoo
dooobeeedooobeeedoooooooo.
its not supposed to make cents only yens francs and dollars.
ideas ideals information introspection duty honor reflection
noble intentions knowing glances enhancements romantic enchantments confusion tears and no place to escape to
when their all nailed to a cross in your honor.
tears held back by a society damned
and internal screams deafen eyes pounded into submission
egos hide behind bruised and beaten reflections
of men who howled for the nighttime and now howl on their own time
unwanted unfinished unknown unwillingly silent in slow deaths
unloving caress.




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Re: Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 02:59:18 AM AEST
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Wow this was unlike any
poem i've read before
I enjoyed it, the message
behind it is so strong
Very creative and talented
writer you are KM
Keep em' coming
i'd like to read more
And welcome to YPDC
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by KM on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 07:36:59 AM AEST
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Thanks for the kind comment. I'm glad I found this site as it seems very active.

If the piece is a little different and unusual it's because I've never really fashioned my stuff after anyone else's. Personally I get tired of reading material that is all so similar both in style and content.


Re: Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 07:39:26 AM AEST
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i agree with oreo this is a great poem the emotions are dripping off of it!


Re: Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Necronomy on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 09:13:17 AM AEST
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yes, quite good, i think you've done a great job of describing what you wanted to say. and it does speak much.




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