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SultryRose's Signatures




Total Voidness


Sometimes I drift and see myself in the realm of time and float
Thinking to myself which will be the next to aspire me so I can gloat
The blurry moment finally arrives and elsewhere my thoughts begin to wonder
Was it all but just a dream and nothing more as I now sit and ponder
The past slowly fades which then evaporates our existence into forgotten debris
It then curtails our living lives and files them into abandoned memories
Future deeds are then scattered right in front of the eyes to faintly see
As vaguely as a mist but partly predictable just as the sea
With us magnetically drawn to it or lest it drawn to us wondering will we last
Or will we vanish through our existence without any notice into the time of past
Here there and at times everywhere sometimes less and other times more elusive
Our own self then gets hold of us and opens our eyes wide to perceive
Then suddenly it all shrinks including the hardest challenges of difficulties
When finally it all seems so small and extremely hazy leaving nothing but memories
Then as precious life does pass at the verge of Total Voidness
It could forever be merely the beginning of the endness
In the rear I will look back then glance and gaze
It’s the same old forever treasured question I shall raise
Was this just a dream? Is there no turning back time in Total Voidness!!!!!




James L. McHenry

Copyright ©2004 James L. McHenry

Copyright ©2004 By Mickey Pig Knuckles

© 2004 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
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Total Voidness

Contributed by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 11:31:57 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems





















SultryRose's Signatures




Total Voidness


Sometimes I drift and see myself in the realm of time and float
Thinking to myself which will be the next to aspire me so I can gloat
The blurry moment finally arrives and elsewhere my thoughts begin to wonder
Was it all but just a dream and nothing more as I now sit and ponder
The past slowly fades which then evaporates our existence into forgotten debris
It then curtails our living lives and files them into abandoned memories
Future deeds are then scattered right in front of the eyes to faintly see
As vaguely as a mist but partly predictable just as the sea
With us magnetically drawn to it or lest it drawn to us wondering will we last
Or will we vanish through our existence without any notice into the time of past
Here there and at times everywhere sometimes less and other times more elusive
Our own self then gets hold of us and opens our eyes wide to perceive
Then suddenly it all shrinks including the hardest challenges of difficulties
When finally it all seems so small and extremely hazy leaving nothing but memories
Then as precious life does pass at the verge of Total Voidness
It could forever be merely the beginning of the endness
In the rear I will look back then glance and gaze
It’s the same old forever treasured question I shall raise
Was this just a dream? Is there no turning back time in Total Voidness!!!!!




James L. McHenry

Copyright ©2004 James L. McHenry

Copyright ©2004 By Mickey Pig Knuckles

© 2004 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)




Copyright © MickeyPigKnuckles ... [ 2004-09-22 11:31:57]
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Re: Total Voidness (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 11:39:07 AM AEST
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Awesome picture, went well with the poem, you have an awesome talant to unveil vivid pictures and unanswered questions.....all this within one poem.
Excellent write.


Re: Total Voidness (User Rating: 1 )
by poetmarie on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 01:21:39 PM AEST
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Wow!! Excellent write. Great picture, it's very fitting. The poem is very imaginative, creative, and beautiful. So much talent.


Re: Total Voidness (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:17:19 PM AEST
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The Surreal eeL y'know Feel says:

Overall, this has all the elements I look for in a poem: good title, good imagery, good ryhme scheme.

Favorite lines:

"Future deeds are then scattered right in front of the eyes to faintly see
As vaguely as the mist but partly predictable just as the sea"

Well done!


Re: Total Voidness (User Rating: 1 )
by Adonia_Donata on Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 01:08:12 PM AEST
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Another awesome write. Already a big fan.




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