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Autumn

Contributed by Hurretje on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:59:22 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



When the yellow dress of Summer
Is replaced by Autumn's raincoat
It's the rolling rhythm of a drummer
On whose beat the colored leaves float

They're like dancers, from left to right
In their head kewl mega dope bytes
See their feet move, sleek and spicy
Empty, their eyes, cold and icy

These crowds don't see their hissing foe
Filling their blind minds with its woe
With cold and dark and emptiness
With crop shorted souls, raw distress

Until they're down in Autumn's soil
And wake, so drenched in Autumn's coil
Their dreamy hopes burked in the clouds
Their petty lifes covered with shrouds

That's Autumn who turns green tops red
The sly fall that turns good moods bad
Its prime sprouts colors on our way
That soon will fly, dissolve in grey

Gone with the birds, they're all due south
The bare land left with open mouth
That breathes in rain and storm and chill
That's when we bend for Autumn's will




Copyright © Hurretje ... [ 2004-09-22 02:59:22]
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Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 03:05:26 AM AEST
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Very beautifully written.
One can see it-n-all it's collers from reading this masterpeice of beauty.
Great job.
luv, huggs, smiles, autumn,
emy


Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 05:31:37 AM AEST
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Love the descriptions in this verse. Great imagery. Beautiful!

WinterFawn


Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 06:14:34 AM AEST
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Woah loved the rythem in this poem, it was like balad being sung welcoming the change.
So vivd in stylings and colors the shouted.
Awesome write.


Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:27:52 AM AEST
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Quite a write. I tend to LOVE this time of year. Makes me think of Ray Bradbury's The October Country. Very well done as always, my friend.
Stitch


Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:14:33 AM AEST
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Autumn is my favorite season of the year. This is my favorite poem about it so far. Mother Nature does her most beautiful work in these months. I am gloriously happy in autumn. Beautiful imagery and flow.

Rita


Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 10:36:56 AM AEST
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very creative..very alive. and graceful

blessed be
sirena


Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 11:59:32 AM AEST
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I adore the Autumn!! This is a great poem Hur, Some amazing images here.
This poem reminds me of stomping through piles of crisp brown red leaves with gloves and a scarf on.
Amazing write.
Much love,
Phil xxx


Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:41:11 AM AEST
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superb..very beautiful;. venkat


Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 11:03:21 PM AEST
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truely beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by SlimStaple on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 12:01:01 PM AEST
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Nice...but I LOVE AUTUMN! It's my favorite time of the year...I hate summer. It's hot...


Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 09:25:58 PM AEST
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BRAVO, AND ANOTHER BRAVO!!!! This poem is so exceptional......I've written about the Autumn, and read everyone else's poem about her too.............but you are the utimate my friend!!!!What a wonderful way of explaining her in all of her Awe! BRAVO again my friend....I shall never forget this poem.........no matter how far I roam!
You've done a great job Autumn would certainly be proud!!!
Poetic hugs and dancing feet
consue


Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:09:18 PM AEST
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Hur, this was such a wonderful read. Keep penning. *S* Cynthia


Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 08:05:38 AM AEST
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oh....how brilliant Hurretje
you do write so well
cheers!~


Re: Autumn (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 04:28:50 PM AEST
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The personification as excellent. It made me view this wondrous season (the best one of them all) in a new point of view. Graceful piece here...
~Carrie~




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