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Within us all

Contributed by lovesucks on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 01:17:28 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I'd like to take some time and share with you what's on my mind
The reason for my fall, the story of how I almost lost it all

I lived my life in hell I never thought I'd get out with my shattered heart and a mind full of doubt
I traveled the wrong road, so dark, so cold, that now a demon owned my soul
A choice I clearly made, I never thought I could be saved
I was far too gone for reality, failure and disaster always followed me.
Everyone I loved I lost and I almost paid a deadly cost
With no hope, love, or faith left inside in this demon I did confide.

With 2 children at home with no mother, this shame believe me.... I know no other

So there I laid lost, broken, beaten, raped, and almost dead, in a low down dirty hospital bed
With no one to call to help me, I turned to God please show me the way, let me see
To choose a road that lights up the night with no detour & end to this in sight

Suddenly it came to be as I laid in this bed.....FORGET the drugs.. call your Dad instead

Boy, that's a blessing all in itself, I can't describe how I feel, how much it's helped

I saw my kids that night I finally knew I did something....something right

Because as I looked into my son's eye, my heart broke I finally cried
In that second I was saved, and anything..ANYTHING for that moment I would have gave

To hear those words I hold so dear........................."MOM, I LOVE YOU..........I'M SO GLAD YOUR HERE.........




Copyright © lovesucks ... [ 2004-09-22 01:17:28]
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Re: Within us all (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 01:24:34 AM AEST
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very sad but ends heavenly.
great writing.
I'm sure many will be helped byt this write.
It's a great example how our heavenly father luvs us right where we are.
God bless u-n-your children.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy


Re: Within us all (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 06:23:43 AM AEST
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beautifully written and with so many emotions, it is a hard road you have chosen, but the right one, may god be with you now and forever.


Re: Within us all (User Rating: 1 )
by FatherTom on Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:40:02 PM AEST
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