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Array ( [sid] => 64683 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => forgotten [time] => 2004-09-21 23:25:50 [hometext] => this is a poem i couldn't figure out where to put it i don't know where i would put it [bodytext] => in the little forgotten
part of town.
where lost hopes
and memories are found

i found an old friend
i lost long ago
she betrayed me she
did things that only i know

she didn't stand by me
like a friend should
she didn't try to help me
like only a friend could

she left me behind
to get by on my own
she left me in time
to be all alone

she was cruel and
she liked to push people away
she was hidden and she found
new ways to hurt me each day

she would yell and scream
when she was mad
she would make herself bleed
she she was sad

she didn't know the
secret tears i cried
she didn't know the
fear i held deep inside

what i didn't know to my dismay
would soon be my worst fear
the friend i had lost long ago
what the girl inside the mirror [comments] => 1 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 43 [informant] => eternityandaday4u [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

forgotten

Contributed by eternityandaday4u on Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 11:25:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

in the little forgotten
part of town.
where lost hopes
and memories are found

i found an old friend
i lost long ago
she betrayed me she
did things that only i know

she didn't stand by me
like a friend should
she didn't try to help me
like only a friend could

she left me behind
to get by on my own
she left me in time
to be all alone

she was cruel and
she liked to push people away
she was hidden and she found
new ways to hurt me each day

she would yell and scream
when she was mad
she would make herself bleed
she she was sad

she didn't know the
secret tears i cried
she didn't know the
fear i held deep inside

what i didn't know to my dismay
would soon be my worst fear
the friend i had lost long ago
what the girl inside the mirror

Copyright © eternityandaday4u ... [ 2004-09-21 23:25:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: forgotten (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 06:37:53 AM AEST
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An awesome write, as to topic I am not sure either, I guess poem that tells a story or sad, hmm well either way I enjoyed reading thankyou for sharing.

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