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Peace.
Charmaine- Rebekkah Simpson [bodytext] => Waves of tears and drops of salt,
Bitter, sweet and twisted.
Falling down her crimson cheek,
Clear and damp and frosted.

Washes of her memory,
Flood their way back home.
His tender touch, his sweet embrace.
The coping on her own.

His eyes of fire when she steps out of line,
As she drops a plate and it smashes.
The thunder of his booming voice,
As her body falls and crashes.

Her broken hopes, her shattered soul,
In pieces on the floor.
Life, love, heart and mind.
Ruined by one man harsh and cruel.

- Charmaine-Rebekkah Simpson
Waves of Tears and Drops of Salt
My Parody of Life
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Waves of Tears and Drops of Salt

Contributed by Dance_the_Blades on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Waves of tears and drops of salt,
Bitter, sweet and twisted.
Falling down her crimson cheek,
Clear and damp and frosted.

Washes of her memory,
Flood their way back home.
His tender touch, his sweet embrace.
The coping on her own.

His eyes of fire when she steps out of line,
As she drops a plate and it smashes.
The thunder of his booming voice,
As her body falls and crashes.

Her broken hopes, her shattered soul,
In pieces on the floor.
Life, love, heart and mind.
Ruined by one man harsh and cruel.

- Charmaine-Rebekkah Simpson
Waves of Tears and Drops of Salt
My Parody of Life

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Re: Waves of Tears and Drops of Salt (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:32:00 PM AEST
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This is so sad, it gives
a good vision, Welcome
to YPDC i really enjoyed
reading this, i hope to
read more
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Waves of Tears and Drops of Salt (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 11:27:30 PM AEST
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Thank you so much for your response..I shall be posting more through soon hopefully..I shall have to pay a visit to you *smiles*

Once again thank you

~*~Dances the Blades~*~

Re: Waves of Tears and Drops of Salt (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_word on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 02:46:21 PM AEST
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it's real, and its what alot of people go through but are too scared to express.
great write.

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