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Array ( [sid] => 6466 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => that day [time] => 2002-11-09 15:00:00 [hometext] => this happened a couple of years ago, and i this is the first time that i have even written about it. [bodytext] => my mind is whirling,
cant make it stop,
no way out, no escape,
or so it seems,
my mind feels rather groggy,
my jaw is very slack,
my face and back just burn and sting,
my hands have been held back,
no way to see where i am,
no way to see your face,
my worst nightmare is coming true,
to be beaten, bound, and used by you,
you promised not to kill me,
as long as i stay still,
but i cant help but flinch,
as you approach my face,
all i want is to escape this horrible place.
you say youre through,
that youre done with me,
now that youve ruined my life,
youll let me be,
so you shove me in your car,
and drive me a very long way,
you push me out the door,
and go on with your day.

now, i have recovered,
or so it may seem,
but nothing can ever give back what you stole from me,
and that day will forever be replayed inside of my mind. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 39 [informant] => nightrider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

that day

Contributed by nightrider on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

my mind is whirling,
cant make it stop,
no way out, no escape,
or so it seems,
my mind feels rather groggy,
my jaw is very slack,
my face and back just burn and sting,
my hands have been held back,
no way to see where i am,
no way to see your face,
my worst nightmare is coming true,
to be beaten, bound, and used by you,
you promised not to kill me,
as long as i stay still,
but i cant help but flinch,
as you approach my face,
all i want is to escape this horrible place.
you say youre through,
that youre done with me,
now that youve ruined my life,
youll let me be,
so you shove me in your car,
and drive me a very long way,
you push me out the door,
and go on with your day.

now, i have recovered,
or so it may seem,
but nothing can ever give back what you stole from me,
and that day will forever be replayed inside of my mind.

Copyright © nightrider ... [ 2002-11-09 15:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: that day (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomsLDY on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:34:37 PM AEST
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this must've been horrible to go through but at least you are here today to write about it . I can't even say that i can imagine how you must've felt because in truth i can't because i've never been where you have.

Re: that day (User Rating: 1 )
by stephy on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 09:05:29 AM AEST
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how awful... my heart truly goes out to you... very good write... well written... i almost feel like i could be at the place where you were at.

Re: that day (User Rating: 1 )
by Yellowrose on Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 11:21:14 AM AEST
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Oh Sweetie, I hope this did not Happen to you and that this is just another of your BRILLIAT works. I am afraid that it might have been you. Please let me know. If this is you, I am here if you ever need to talk, Yellowrose.

Re: that day (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 10:26:26 PM AEST
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Wow.....awesome write...this gave me chills....very emotional.......my heart goes out to you

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