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Array ( [sid] => 6465 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Opeth [time] => 2002-11-09 14:30:00 [hometext] => What if death has a name???? [bodytext] => Hush my delicate flower, no need to cry that much
It's just a little taste of sour and my gentle touch
I welcome you to my abyss of dark and gloom
Back where you were born, inside mother earth's womb

Don't screem that much! the others are still sleeping
Your beloved ones may be above, but they can't hear you weeping
Just shut your pretty eyes and die
You are alone now, but please don't cry

They told you about angels and heaven in the skies
Now you're in my realm, away from those bitter lies
The earth worms will soon eat your rotten skin
And penetrate your flesh, penetrating deep within

Sleep my love as you lay beside me
Stay close to me, right where I want you to be
Lay your well shaped bones in my eternal bed
And in my arms you still live, even thou you're dead

Mourn no more, your soul has long departed
Just hate me as much as you can, I'm a hollow hearted
Live with me away from world's riches and wealth
My name is Opeth ...the name of death. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Opium [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Opeth

Contributed by Opium on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Hush my delicate flower, no need to cry that much
It's just a little taste of sour and my gentle touch
I welcome you to my abyss of dark and gloom
Back where you were born, inside mother earth's womb

Don't screem that much! the others are still sleeping
Your beloved ones may be above, but they can't hear you weeping
Just shut your pretty eyes and die
You are alone now, but please don't cry

They told you about angels and heaven in the skies
Now you're in my realm, away from those bitter lies
The earth worms will soon eat your rotten skin
And penetrate your flesh, penetrating deep within

Sleep my love as you lay beside me
Stay close to me, right where I want you to be
Lay your well shaped bones in my eternal bed
And in my arms you still live, even thou you're dead

Mourn no more, your soul has long departed
Just hate me as much as you can, I'm a hollow hearted
Live with me away from world's riches and wealth
My name is Opeth ...the name of death.




Copyright © Opium ... [ 2002-11-09 14:30:00]
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Re: Opeth (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:34:39 PM AEST
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This is scary lol
Wow this needs to be
a scary movie or somthing
it's a wonderful write
alot of creativeness in it
Thanks for sharing this one
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Opeth (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 10:22:55 PM AEST
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How sweet!


Re: Opeth (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 03:43:56 AM AEST
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The only thing I dont like about this is the fact I didnt write it myself! lol Great work Opium.!

Larry


Re: Opeth (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 07:30:48 AM AEST
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Great poem. Scary stuff!


Re: Opeth (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 11:20:50 PM AEST
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Chilling content, very well written!


Re: Opeth (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 12:43:57 AM AEST
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This is scary lol
Wow this needs to be
a scary movie or somthing
it's a wonderful write
alot of creativeness in it
Thanks for sharing this one
Keep em' coming .......Gina




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